Poems About Romantic Seeking Honest Critique
#romantic
Poems about romantic seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Sweet Aries
Sweet Aries,
Your element is Fire.
Consume me,
You are my desire.
Sweet Aries,
Ruled by planet Mars,
The Diamond,
I see inside the stars.
Sweet Aries,
Such an open heart.
I want you,
Come tear me apart.
Sweet Aries,
Ruler of the head,
I'll Love you,
Despite what may be said.
Sweet Aries,
I'm your loving Bull,
Ruled by Venus,
Made to be your fool.
Sweet Aries,
Ruler of the flame,
I am yours,
...
Your element is Fire.
Consume me,
You are my desire.
Sweet Aries,
Ruled by planet Mars,
The Diamond,
I see inside the stars.
Sweet Aries,
Such an open heart.
I want you,
Come tear me apart.
Sweet Aries,
Ruler of the head,
I'll Love you,
Despite what may be said.
Sweet Aries,
I'm your loving Bull,
Ruled by Venus,
Made to be your fool.
Sweet Aries,
Ruler of the flame,
I am yours,
...
#romantic
#astrology
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Trapped In Love
I am trapped in love
waiting on the cliffs edge, waiting for the shove
I am bound to loving you
and there's nothing I can do
I'll sit here waiting for you forever and always
though I'm so lonely most days
I'm like a plant and your like the sun
when it comes down to it you don't need me and if you left I'd be over and done
I want so much
and I'm here dying to feel your touch
some days I want to give up on this
let some guy claim my lips in a kiss
but what would that do?
when I think part of me will always be in love with you
so if forever...
waiting on the cliffs edge, waiting for the shove
I am bound to loving you
and there's nothing I can do
I'll sit here waiting for you forever and always
though I'm so lonely most days
I'm like a plant and your like the sun
when it comes down to it you don't need me and if you left I'd be over and done
I want so much
and I'm here dying to feel your touch
some days I want to give up on this
let some guy claim my lips in a kiss
but what would that do?
when I think part of me will always be in love with you
so if forever...
#romantic
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3 Comments
Perspicacious
Slivers of the day
Broken shards of time
Remnants of your essence
Linger on my soul
Daydreams fashion
Merge Our union
Cherishing the moments
Tokens of time
No responsive realization
Content to mind the bliss
Sharing fragments
Of natures kiss
Wordsworth and Cummings
Whisper in the wind
Breathing thoughtful breath
Food of our Souls
Broken shards of time
Remnants of your essence
Linger on my soul
Daydreams fashion
Merge Our union
Cherishing the moments
Tokens of time
No responsive realization
Content to mind the bliss
Sharing fragments
Of natures kiss
Wordsworth and Cummings
Whisper in the wind
Breathing thoughtful breath
Food of our Souls
#romantic
#nature
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14 Comments
Desert Flower
Hitchhike into eternity
you're searching
for the blue-grass
Tho, these fields are greener
you've got to carry on
So, fix your self a fat-tire
I'm looking for a reason
to keep you
past your bed-time
& enjoy this summer season
CHORUS:
Oh- my
I've found a desert flower
It grows upon a cactus
to protect it from the showers
It's soft to the touch
but it just might hurt
to squeeze
So, hold- on gently ...
you're searching
for the blue-grass
Tho, these fields are greener
you've got to carry on
So, fix your self a fat-tire
I'm looking for a reason
to keep you
past your bed-time
& enjoy this summer season
CHORUS:
Oh- my
I've found a desert flower
It grows upon a cactus
to protect it from the showers
It's soft to the touch
but it just might hurt
to squeeze
So, hold- on gently ...
#romantic
#lyrics
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My Heart
I sat and listened to the whispers of the wandering winds who know all about present and past
The truth of what will decay & crumble and whats built to last
They told me "Home is where the heart is my boy, and this is the truth"
So I went home & carved my heart out and gave it to you
Love teach it every emotion and never to fake it
I entrust you with my life, so love, please don't break it
Grow it to be adventurous & prosperous and to achieve
And above all love, teach it to belive
My heart, hold it close to yoursto keep it warm
As long...
The truth of what will decay & crumble and whats built to last
They told me "Home is where the heart is my boy, and this is the truth"
So I went home & carved my heart out and gave it to you
Love teach it every emotion and never to fake it
I entrust you with my life, so love, please don't break it
Grow it to be adventurous & prosperous and to achieve
And above all love, teach it to belive
My heart, hold it close to yoursto keep it warm
As long...
#romantic
#home
#LifeCycle
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Beat Of My Heart
No matter what I say,
I can never just pretend,
I can survive one day,
Without you on my mind.
The fogged moonlight,
Kisses the horizon of our love.
And the mist of sadness,
Sits close above.
I count the moments away from you.
The stars are suffocating…
And I blindly fall,
Into dreams.
Caressed in rivers,
Winding through purple hills,
With the winds of forever.
The promises we made,
Bond me to this bed,
As the constant squeal,
Of your heart pounds in my head.
The white of the sheets,
The flowers a false...
I can never just pretend,
I can survive one day,
Without you on my mind.
The fogged moonlight,
Kisses the horizon of our love.
And the mist of sadness,
Sits close above.
I count the moments away from you.
The stars are suffocating…
And I blindly fall,
Into dreams.
Caressed in rivers,
Winding through purple hills,
With the winds of forever.
The promises we made,
Bond me to this bed,
As the constant squeal,
Of your heart pounds in my head.
The white of the sheets,
The flowers a false...
#heartbroken
#romantic
#lyrics
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DU Poetry : Poems About Romantic Seeking Honest Critique