Poems About Romantic Seeking Honest Critique
#romantic
Poems about romantic seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
testing_recpatcha
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2018 4:59pm
3rd Mar 2018 4:59pm
adsdas
sdasd
#dark
#soldiers
#romantic #abuse
#romantic #abuse
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lilsouthernbelle
Poem Published
8th Sep 2014 7:14pm
8th Sep 2014 7:14pm
Cowgirl Up!!!!!
Here we go!!!!
Hot and steamy Nashville night
Goin' out with friends
YEEEEE HAAAAW!!!!
Short 'lil summer dress
Spaghetti strapped white eyelet
Perfect hint of perfume...Tresor
Bare legs and cowboy boots
The bar is packed to full capacity
Our seats were reserved
My friend's husband is playing tonight
They're up next!!!
Our drinks finally arrive
A shot of Jameson to start off
Mmmmm....feel the burn
As it runs down my throat
Wish you were here
Damn....wouldn't that have been one hell of a night?!?
The...
Hot and steamy Nashville night
Goin' out with friends
YEEEEE HAAAAW!!!!
Short 'lil summer dress
Spaghetti strapped white eyelet
Perfect hint of perfume...Tresor
Bare legs and cowboy boots
The bar is packed to full capacity
Our seats were reserved
My friend's husband is playing tonight
They're up next!!!
Our drinks finally arrive
A shot of Jameson to start off
Mmmmm....feel the burn
As it runs down my throat
Wish you were here
Damn....wouldn't that have been one hell of a night?!?
The...
#dark
#teens
#soldiers #romantic
#soldiers #romantic
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MilkyJoe
Milky
Milky
Poem Published
8th Sep 2014 4:59pm
8th Sep 2014 4:59pm
I am not okay
I am not okay
lying and lying to what little is left
pretending
that im not being chewed up
and eaten away
It is a struggle
Life, is a struggle
And this stranglers no stranger
I know him well enough
well
Enough to let him break through
And although Im cracking
And I want to bleed or cry
I know Im just not going to
Im never going to
And for the life of me
I cannot figure out why
lying and lying to what little is left
pretending
that im not being chewed up
and eaten away
It is a struggle
Life, is a struggle
And this stranglers no stranger
I know him well enough
well
Enough to let him break through
And although Im cracking
And I want to bleed or cry
I know Im just not going to
Im never going to
And for the life of me
I cannot figure out why
#soldiers
#birth
#teens #romantic
#teens #romantic
80 reads
1 Comment
malin69
malin
malin
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2014 00:54am
23rd Apr 2014 00:54am
Angel in the sky (picture version)
Angel in the sky
Pretty eyes like emerald
Silky milky skin
I love you so much, I love
I miss you too much, really
Tigress when angry
Fire flames through the gun-eyes
Teeth ready to bite
I am afraid to lose you
I need to be so quiet
Red lips as honey
Face of an pretty angel
A sweet mezzo voice
I huddle up in your arms
I cuddle you so sweetly
Really for me
It is a true paradise
I love you so much
Pretty eyes like emerald
Silky milky skin
I love you so much, I love
I miss you too much, really
Tigress when angry
Fire flames through the gun-eyes
Teeth ready to bite
I am afraid to lose you
I need to be so quiet
Red lips as honey
Face of an pretty angel
A sweet mezzo voice
I huddle up in your arms
I cuddle you so sweetly
Really for me
It is a true paradise
I love you so much
#relationships
#romantic
#ILoveYou
131 reads
4 Comments
Naidy
Poem Published
8th Mar 2014 1:09pm
8th Mar 2014 1:09pm
Love of a Bee
She's a lone rose that stands tall within the jungle
She faces the brunt of the full force of mother nature
While battling the pain of being alone
All the other bees tried but never had any intention of gettin the pollen
They all stopped climbing when they realized she had sharp thorns
I was a bee who saw her beauty from afar
But that's not jus where I wanted to stop
So I landed at the bottom of her stem and begun my ascend up her stem
Feeling the pain of her loneliness and the sheer force of mother nature on her
The climb became tough...
She faces the brunt of the full force of mother nature
While battling the pain of being alone
All the other bees tried but never had any intention of gettin the pollen
They all stopped climbing when they realized she had sharp thorns
I was a bee who saw her beauty from afar
But that's not jus where I wanted to stop
So I landed at the bottom of her stem and begun my ascend up her stem
Feeling the pain of her loneliness and the sheer force of mother nature on her
The climb became tough...
#romantic
#rose
#bees #support
#bees #support
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candencecollapsing
Poem Published
5th Mar 2014 6:36pm
5th Mar 2014 6:36pm
Nicotine
I call myself nicotine
Infectious little smiles that cause rings around your eyes
Ignite me
We can just blow smoke tonight
I like to get caught in your lungs and steal your breath away
I'm fire with your sight roaming
When there's nothing more to say
Free me outside
Letting you watch me dance away with no need for goodbyes
I twist around your torso and mingle in with the fabric of your clothes
Unable to be contained
I am at home floating in space
I remain in the ashes on your doorstep
Waiting for the wind to sweep me away ...
Infectious little smiles that cause rings around your eyes
Ignite me
We can just blow smoke tonight
I like to get caught in your lungs and steal your breath away
I'm fire with your sight roaming
When there's nothing more to say
Free me outside
Letting you watch me dance away with no need for goodbyes
I twist around your torso and mingle in with the fabric of your clothes
Unable to be contained
I am at home floating in space
I remain in the ashes on your doorstep
Waiting for the wind to sweep me away ...
#romantic
#tobacco
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BigVirge
Poem Published
14th Feb 2014 3:28am
14th Feb 2014 3:28am
"Will You Be My Valentine ???" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 15/2/2005
So ... V ...
Will You be .... ??? ....
My Valentine ... ???
HeLLLLLLL NO ...... !!!!!!! ........
I'd rather spend my time ....
Writing poems ... That DEFINE ... !!!
THE TRUTH .......... to..........
"STUPID" ... female minds ... !!!!
YES ..... I'M SINGLE ..... !!!!!
That's ..... My Crime .....
But ..... It's by ... CHOICE ... !!!
NOT BY ... Design ... !!!! ...
So take ... " Your Time " ...
Before you judge ....
My View ...
on ..." This Thing "...
Called .... "VALENTINES" ... !!?!! ... ...
Will You be .... ??? ....
My Valentine ... ???
HeLLLLLLL NO ...... !!!!!!! ........
I'd rather spend my time ....
Writing poems ... That DEFINE ... !!!
THE TRUTH .......... to..........
"STUPID" ... female minds ... !!!!
YES ..... I'M SINGLE ..... !!!!!
That's ..... My Crime .....
But ..... It's by ... CHOICE ... !!!
NOT BY ... Design ... !!!! ...
So take ... " Your Time " ...
Before you judge ....
My View ...
on ..." This Thing "...
Called .... "VALENTINES" ... !!?!! ... ...
#relationships
#romantic
157 reads
4 Comments
malin69
malin
malin
Poem Published
13th Dec 2013 3:31pm
13th Dec 2013 3:31pm
Triolet 3-5-3 (2013-12-13)
Quiet in night
Sure, Gabi loves me
I love her
I know that
She gives all her love
Just for me
As you see
All my poetry
Is for her
Sure, Gabi loves me
I love her
I know that
She gives all her love
Just for me
As you see
All my poetry
Is for her
#romantic
72 reads
2 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
19th Sep 2013 4:41am
19th Sep 2013 4:41am
Just for you
If Shakespeare were here
you would be his tragedy
Mozart and Beethoven
you would be their symphony
Galileo would gaze into the stars
and give a planet your name
Christopher Columbus
would sail the ocean blue
and Neil Armstrong
would fly you to the moon
while Hemingway writes
a bestseller about you
The Great Houdini
would chain himself up
and face certain death
for you
Babe Ruth would hit home runs
and Evil Knievel would
jump the ...
you would be his tragedy
Mozart and Beethoven
you would be their symphony
Galileo would gaze into the stars
and give a planet your name
Christopher Columbus
would sail the ocean blue
and Neil Armstrong
would fly you to the moon
while Hemingway writes
a bestseller about you
The Great Houdini
would chain himself up
and face certain death
for you
Babe Ruth would hit home runs
and Evil Knievel would
jump the ...
#romantic
194 reads
30 Comments
josephine
Poem Published
19th May 2013 12:40pm
19th May 2013 12:40pm
Where the desert meets the ocean
There is one place on the Earth,
Where the desert meets the ocean.
A view in your mind for the whole your life.
Once I saw that in my dream.
The Desert Namib.
Something enormous.
Golden sands and a silence.
The sun is living in each one grain of it.
Namib, where the sun reflects itself.
With so high sand dunes, that you can`t imagine.
With silence, the sound of it you ll never forget.
Hot, lonely and golden.
And next to it the endless ocean Atlantic.
Majestic, blue, cold and impressive.
The sky is living in each one...
Where the desert meets the ocean.
A view in your mind for the whole your life.
Once I saw that in my dream.
The Desert Namib.
Something enormous.
Golden sands and a silence.
The sun is living in each one grain of it.
Namib, where the sun reflects itself.
With so high sand dunes, that you can`t imagine.
With silence, the sound of it you ll never forget.
Hot, lonely and golden.
And next to it the endless ocean Atlantic.
Majestic, blue, cold and impressive.
The sky is living in each one...
#romantic
#sea
132 reads
5 Comments
marielavoue
Gypsy Red
Gypsy Red
Poem Published
16th May 2013 11:59pm
16th May 2013 11:59pm
Spellbound
Heaven help me…
You have something
that has me spellbound,
a black magic that enchants,
making me feel ironbound,
I moves as if I was a puppet or zombie
yet I do not mind your malice;
I crave that Voodoo that you do, you are wicked
but I wish only to drink from your chalice.
In my life, the light you have eclipsed;
disturbing my senses making me yours, completely.
For you, I forget myself
and try as I might to pretend,
I can not escape your spell,
no longer do I wish to comprehend,
what it is that...
You have something
that has me spellbound,
a black magic that enchants,
making me feel ironbound,
I moves as if I was a puppet or zombie
yet I do not mind your malice;
I crave that Voodoo that you do, you are wicked
but I wish only to drink from your chalice.
In my life, the light you have eclipsed;
disturbing my senses making me yours, completely.
For you, I forget myself
and try as I might to pretend,
I can not escape your spell,
no longer do I wish to comprehend,
what it is that...
#lust
#romantic
#magic
433 reads
28 Comments
PhantomPoet
Zoe..
Zoe..
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2013 8:28pm
3rd Feb 2013 8:28pm
Chambers
Hair, as golden as the last remains
of the sun, before night has fallen.
The color of those final specks of dust
that shimmer like an abditive secret in the sky.
That golden hair that my fingers
so desperately yearn to caress.
Eyes blue as the flames of icy fire
that was caused by the reaction of sulfur.
Those blue eyes of Compassion.
Those eyes of Cerulean kindness.
Skin, the mystical color of a foggy pearl
that has been covered in ocean mist.
The glowing color of a cloud after a storm
that swept...
of the sun, before night has fallen.
The color of those final specks of dust
that shimmer like an abditive secret in the sky.
That golden hair that my fingers
so desperately yearn to caress.
Eyes blue as the flames of icy fire
that was caused by the reaction of sulfur.
Those blue eyes of Compassion.
Those eyes of Cerulean kindness.
Skin, the mystical color of a foggy pearl
that has been covered in ocean mist.
The glowing color of a cloud after a storm
that swept...
#kindness
#romantic
#beauty #nature
#beauty #nature
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