Upbeat Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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sdfddsf
#lover
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adsdas
sdasd
#dark
#soldiers
#romantic #abuse
#romantic #abuse
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sdadas
#depression
#dark
#holiday
30 reads
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sdfdsfdsffds
#depression
#birth
#BestFriend #silence
#BestFriend #silence
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wefwfwe
ewfwfew
46 reads
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gdgfgd
fgdgdgf
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dfasdsd
sddad
#boyfriend
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“Dressed in Disguise” Written by: Jimmy N. Alvarez
I can’t wait to meet you
You’re one of a kind
Your special presence comes with a price to pay
Especially for me I’m the world’s biggest underdog
Chasing the world’s biggest trophy
The odds to have you are one in a billion
People say I’m crazy, for chasing the impossible
But crazy is what it takes to get you
You’re intrigued by my ways that only a real man can provide
I’m special kinda of guy, that’s made for only a chosen few
You waved to me from a far view, on the other side
...
You’re one of a kind
Your special presence comes with a price to pay
Especially for me I’m the world’s biggest underdog
Chasing the world’s biggest trophy
The odds to have you are one in a billion
People say I’m crazy, for chasing the impossible
But crazy is what it takes to get you
You’re intrigued by my ways that only a real man can provide
I’m special kinda of guy, that’s made for only a chosen few
You waved to me from a far view, on the other side
...
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A limerick 'bout Jim
Entered in The first trophy comp ")
Jim Croce was a soulful man
his words could turn a white girl tan!
he sang songs from his heart
time in a bottle was smart
and I am his number one fan!
Maybe this one's the charm.
wish me luck Jim*
Jim Croce was a soulful man
his words could turn a white girl tan!
he sang songs from his heart
time in a bottle was smart
and I am his number one fan!
Maybe this one's the charm.
wish me luck Jim*
#apocalypse
#grief
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Always; Forever
Warm summer breeze
Clouds drift by
White against blue
Stirring autumn trees
Guiding me gently
Back to our home
Towards only you
Nature's planned destiny
My forever
My always
My friend
My true North
...For my husband
Clouds drift by
White against blue
Stirring autumn trees
Guiding me gently
Back to our home
Towards only you
Nature's planned destiny
My forever
My always
My friend
My true North
...For my husband
29 reads
1 Comment
I rented a room @Dup.com
So I rented a room last week @Dup.com
Did you know it comes with free poetry
a view and free coffee?
My first night at the Inn I ventured
downstairs, hey? Did anyone know
Madame Lavender opened a Bar & Grill on Dup?
I also hear,the Doc, gives free
medical advice too :|
she's such a good ole gal "D
Anyway, a few regulars were scattered about
some were having drinks while others
were dancing enjoying the cool menthol...
Did you know it comes with free poetry
a view and free coffee?
My first night at the Inn I ventured
downstairs, hey? Did anyone know
Madame Lavender opened a Bar & Grill on Dup?
I also hear,the Doc, gives free
medical advice too :|
she's such a good ole gal "D
Anyway, a few regulars were scattered about
some were having drinks while others
were dancing enjoying the cool menthol...
48 reads
5 Comments
Sick and sin
To Mailee
Through thick and thin and sick and sin
All right
So here's the deal
You're my best friend
In all the land
We've been through it
Been through the bad
The good stuff too
We've had loads of fun
We'll have lots more
In days to come
The bad is sure to rear its ugly face
Yet we always manage to come through with love if not entirely grace
I'm missing you
I think, mayhap, you miss me too
So, remember this, please, when you can
I'm here, friend, sister, your ever-loyal fan
...
Through thick and thin and sick and sin
All right
So here's the deal
You're my best friend
In all the land
We've been through it
Been through the bad
The good stuff too
We've had loads of fun
We'll have lots more
In days to come
The bad is sure to rear its ugly face
Yet we always manage to come through with love if not entirely grace
I'm missing you
I think, mayhap, you miss me too
So, remember this, please, when you can
I'm here, friend, sister, your ever-loyal fan
...
66 reads
16 Comments
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