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#hell
#lover
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sxssaas
ASASAsaS
#lover
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sdfds
#& sdfsdfdsf
#patience
#FallingInLove
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asdd
#dark
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edadwwd
She sits and ponders
while hearing his voice
anticipating
the vibrato of growls
His heavy breathing,
his grunts and groans
all echoed
in the throws of passion
Breaths will exude
when he sinks hungry teeth <~~ it ends here after I hit submit but all is fine when
while hearing his voice
anticipating
the vibrato of growls
His heavy breathing,
his grunts and groans
all echoed
in the throws of passion
Breaths will exude
when he sinks hungry teeth <~~ it ends here after I hit submit but all is fine when
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sdadasda ads
sdadsadas
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CDC
DASSD
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sdssdas
sdsdsdsd
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martini
A Sophisticated Drink
It stood there on the table a litre bottle of martini stuff
made in a factory in Milan and has nothing to do with
proper wine. The workers are basely underpaid, when
they ask a rise the get served martini for breakfast-.
Or perhaps I´m wrong and it is in South Africa where
sober wine workers get fired because they are unionised
and do ask for a better wage. Martini is a cheap product
that has been given a great write up, a liquid of alcohol,
water and some good smelling herbs.
The mystery is not solved who had put the...
It stood there on the table a litre bottle of martini stuff
made in a factory in Milan and has nothing to do with
proper wine. The workers are basely underpaid, when
they ask a rise the get served martini for breakfast-.
Or perhaps I´m wrong and it is in South Africa where
sober wine workers get fired because they are unionised
and do ask for a better wage. Martini is a cheap product
that has been given a great write up, a liquid of alcohol,
water and some good smelling herbs.
The mystery is not solved who had put the...
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Infinite Elation
Two grown women
and lots of playground equipment.
Never did I think we would
one day fit that description.
Sun, some sand, sticky sugar coating our hands;
I really felt like I was a kid again.
We made castles in the sand,
fed some seagulls a couple of french fries by hand
and you even got a local band to play
our song.
I was honestly so happy all day long.
You even taught me how to make a pinwheel
except this time I didn't cheat and use hot glue.
We walked around town for a bit,
took in the sights, the sounds.
Then we went...
and lots of playground equipment.
Never did I think we would
one day fit that description.
Sun, some sand, sticky sugar coating our hands;
I really felt like I was a kid again.
We made castles in the sand,
fed some seagulls a couple of french fries by hand
and you even got a local band to play
our song.
I was honestly so happy all day long.
You even taught me how to make a pinwheel
except this time I didn't cheat and use hot glue.
We walked around town for a bit,
took in the sights, the sounds.
Then we went...
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Hope
Lately I've been so low
Like I've been in an eternal limbo
So morose
Talking to my own Shadow
But I guess I never had much Hope
About what the future may hold
I thought I lost it all; my humanity,
My soul,
To the devil I thought I sold
But now I know
That there's a God who saw it all, saw me lying on the floor
In an abyss, battered to the core
I thought I was too far gone to be saved anymore
Sucked into a black hole,
thinking if I could just take an extra dose
I'll drift away to a better place and all the pain would go ...
Like I've been in an eternal limbo
So morose
Talking to my own Shadow
But I guess I never had much Hope
About what the future may hold
I thought I lost it all; my humanity,
My soul,
To the devil I thought I sold
But now I know
That there's a God who saw it all, saw me lying on the floor
In an abyss, battered to the core
I thought I was too far gone to be saved anymore
Sucked into a black hole,
thinking if I could just take an extra dose
I'll drift away to a better place and all the pain would go ...
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Beach Day - A Haiku
Hot, humid, sea breeze
Pale lips, black cherry ice cream
Seagull lullaby
Pale lips, black cherry ice cream
Seagull lullaby
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