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mrbaker
Poem Published
5th Jul 2014 8:11pm
5th Jul 2014 8:11pm
but you
i go marching to my own drummer
with you by my side
walked through all the thunder
crossing the great divide
i got nothing left to lose
got my head in a noose
swinging with these blues
nothing left to lose
nothing left to lose
but you
baby baby but you
took a drive down the wrong highway
with you along for the ride
i never meant to go astray
where love and hate collide
i got nothing left to lose
got my head in a noose
swinging with these blues
nothing left to lose
nothing left to lose
but...
with you by my side
walked through all the thunder
crossing the great divide
i got nothing left to lose
got my head in a noose
swinging with these blues
nothing left to lose
nothing left to lose
but you
baby baby but you
took a drive down the wrong highway
with you along for the ride
i never meant to go astray
where love and hate collide
i got nothing left to lose
got my head in a noose
swinging with these blues
nothing left to lose
nothing left to lose
but...
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CarrionCrow44
Poem Published
3rd Jul 2014 5:53am
3rd Jul 2014 5:53am
Dead Reckoning
The west is done
Like knocking on fallen doors
You should have seen them telephones
I saw near Minnesota
I'm like an old relic
Too slow to keep up anymore
World's already a mile down the road
It's not waiting on me
Dead I reckon
Nothing else to want
Killed for the wrong reasons
I'll tell you
Blood don't forget
Comes around in the end
Billy is running wild
Said he saw all of this coming
I suppose opium really does drive a man
To bleed from insanity
He's going to affliction
About a two day's...
Like knocking on fallen doors
You should have seen them telephones
I saw near Minnesota
I'm like an old relic
Too slow to keep up anymore
World's already a mile down the road
It's not waiting on me
Dead I reckon
Nothing else to want
Killed for the wrong reasons
I'll tell you
Blood don't forget
Comes around in the end
Billy is running wild
Said he saw all of this coming
I suppose opium really does drive a man
To bleed from insanity
He's going to affliction
About a two day's...
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Comrade
Poem Published
2nd Jul 2014 8:00pm
2nd Jul 2014 8:00pm
Odyssey
Me and my split personality just made history
He sits opposite of my conscious but we're thick as thieves
And thanks to my accomplice
I broke that chain of evidence and robbed the bank just for the pen on the desk
And I won't fall victim of the guilt trip method
Cause I'll make the best use of it
I'm the exoskeleton of an ex-gentleman
The next generation X bringing back delinquency from the brink of extinction
Writing is my near-life experiance
The ink is potent enough to sink in through osmosis
And I just wrote this with an epinephrine pen to...
He sits opposite of my conscious but we're thick as thieves
And thanks to my accomplice
I broke that chain of evidence and robbed the bank just for the pen on the desk
And I won't fall victim of the guilt trip method
Cause I'll make the best use of it
I'm the exoskeleton of an ex-gentleman
The next generation X bringing back delinquency from the brink of extinction
Writing is my near-life experiance
The ink is potent enough to sink in through osmosis
And I just wrote this with an epinephrine pen to...
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CarrionCrow44
Poem Published
26th Jun 2014 6:49am
26th Jun 2014 6:49am
At The Getting Place
Fear in my heart
Twelve gauge ready to go
An ominous noise in the distance
Friend pulling on me
On the road to hell now
Closing my eyes
Another shell ripping flesh
Distorted sounds cascade all around
A ringing in the ears
This could be my last
Slug in my leg
Pain riding up and down
The sun's harsh gaze beckoning
I just might follow
Fate stepped in again
My knee is a mess
And the side's all chewed up
But you don't look too well yourself
Let's savor our breath
Before you tell me where...
Twelve gauge ready to go
An ominous noise in the distance
Friend pulling on me
On the road to hell now
Closing my eyes
Another shell ripping flesh
Distorted sounds cascade all around
A ringing in the ears
This could be my last
Slug in my leg
Pain riding up and down
The sun's harsh gaze beckoning
I just might follow
Fate stepped in again
My knee is a mess
And the side's all chewed up
But you don't look too well yourself
Let's savor our breath
Before you tell me where...
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Comrade
Poem Published
23rd Jun 2014 2:24pm
23rd Jun 2014 2:24pm
As good as it gets
How can I peacefully fight for peace?
How can I win in the ring when my opponent is the referee?
I've seen the work of bribe money spent against me
A special thanks to my enemies for always being there for me
I've found better investments than friends
Bought stock in abandonment and doubled my profits
I'm the lone legend of coldness
Found loneliness on the corner of Memory Lane and a fifth
Finally got what I always wanted
And I sure built shoulder strength holding all the burdens of earth
Never heard a word of truth in a church so I gave up the search...
How can I win in the ring when my opponent is the referee?
I've seen the work of bribe money spent against me
A special thanks to my enemies for always being there for me
I've found better investments than friends
Bought stock in abandonment and doubled my profits
I'm the lone legend of coldness
Found loneliness on the corner of Memory Lane and a fifth
Finally got what I always wanted
And I sure built shoulder strength holding all the burdens of earth
Never heard a word of truth in a church so I gave up the search...
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CarrionCrow44
Poem Published
23rd Jun 2014 4:32am
23rd Jun 2014 4:32am
Ezekiel 25:17
See me standing here
I can feel it creeping up my spine
You haven't changed at all
Still kicking stones
I've come for you
Be waiting in the streets
Made a wager that we both lost
I loved you kid
And now it's time to go
Let faith decide who's leaving
Billy sends his regards
Wanted me to deliver you gently
But I respect you too much
To kill from behind
I've come for you
Be waiting in the streets
Made a wager that we both lost
I loved you kid
And now it's time to go
Let faith decide who's leaving...
I can feel it creeping up my spine
You haven't changed at all
Still kicking stones
I've come for you
Be waiting in the streets
Made a wager that we both lost
I loved you kid
And now it's time to go
Let faith decide who's leaving
Billy sends his regards
Wanted me to deliver you gently
But I respect you too much
To kill from behind
I've come for you
Be waiting in the streets
Made a wager that we both lost
I loved you kid
And now it's time to go
Let faith decide who's leaving...
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mrbaker
Poem Published
19th Jun 2014 8:23pm
19th Jun 2014 8:23pm
crazy like love
i washed up on her shore
searching for a cure
she’s got me in her sights
dead to rights
ain’t feeling real lucky
its all getting fuzzy
but hey hey
she’s got me running blind
going out of my mind
all rolled up ready to burst
baby i think i’m cursed
not feeling real lucky
everythings getting crazy
yeah
you know she’s crazy like Larry
on a hot summer night
pedal down getting dirty
in the back of my car making it right
you know she’s crazy like
(oooooh ah oooooh)
you know she’s crazy like ...
searching for a cure
she’s got me in her sights
dead to rights
ain’t feeling real lucky
its all getting fuzzy
but hey hey
she’s got me running blind
going out of my mind
all rolled up ready to burst
baby i think i’m cursed
not feeling real lucky
everythings getting crazy
yeah
you know she’s crazy like Larry
on a hot summer night
pedal down getting dirty
in the back of my car making it right
you know she’s crazy like
(oooooh ah oooooh)
you know she’s crazy like ...
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CarrionCrow44
Poem Published
19th Jun 2014 7:11pm
19th Jun 2014 7:11pm
The River Went Dry
He's with a whore
John never could resist them
It's why he's got a noose over his head
Law's inside him
Like a dog beat too much
I'll leave it up to you to finish him
I want it done quick
And make sure his river runs dry
Because we put him there
All up in that mess
I'll be in Chester
Digging up the last of it
Confederate gold is almost gone
Tell me charlie
Have I ever let you down
Some excuses are never forgiven
I want it done quick
And make sure his river runs dry
Because we put him there...
John never could resist them
It's why he's got a noose over his head
Law's inside him
Like a dog beat too much
I'll leave it up to you to finish him
I want it done quick
And make sure his river runs dry
Because we put him there
All up in that mess
I'll be in Chester
Digging up the last of it
Confederate gold is almost gone
Tell me charlie
Have I ever let you down
Some excuses are never forgiven
I want it done quick
And make sure his river runs dry
Because we put him there...
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NicoleJames1997
Poem Published
18th Jun 2014 9:20am
18th Jun 2014 9:20am
Bullying
I've never been so quiet
before all this happened;
the bullies standing in my way,
pushing me to my death.
Why should another human
make another human feel suicidal?
It should not be like this.
I am sick of the scars and the crying:
Why should I do this to myself?
You call out horrible names;
it makes me feel unwanted.
You say am too fat.
You say am too skinny.
You say am not cool.
You say am not pretty.
Then, you spread it around school,
and post it online for the whole world...
before all this happened;
the bullies standing in my way,
pushing me to my death.
Why should another human
make another human feel suicidal?
It should not be like this.
I am sick of the scars and the crying:
Why should I do this to myself?
You call out horrible names;
it makes me feel unwanted.
You say am too fat.
You say am too skinny.
You say am not cool.
You say am not pretty.
Then, you spread it around school,
and post it online for the whole world...
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Comrade
Poem Published
16th Jun 2014 3:03pm
16th Jun 2014 3:03pm
My own worst enemy
So awkward I astonish the astronomers
Send me to the loony bin
I'm a lunatic
And I'll come out worse than when I went in
Irrelevant topics make me sick
Lonliness is my tonic
And it's a bit ironic how the pen has a grip on my fingertips
Cause I'm laconic
But I speak silence fluently
My voice is just ultrasonic
Bionic tongue talking in oxymorons
I've got this weirdness down to a perfect science
I'm the backrest you lean against with the cracked plastic jabbing you in the back to counter the pain in your chest I'm the honest con artist...
Send me to the loony bin
I'm a lunatic
And I'll come out worse than when I went in
Irrelevant topics make me sick
Lonliness is my tonic
And it's a bit ironic how the pen has a grip on my fingertips
Cause I'm laconic
But I speak silence fluently
My voice is just ultrasonic
Bionic tongue talking in oxymorons
I've got this weirdness down to a perfect science
I'm the backrest you lean against with the cracked plastic jabbing you in the back to counter the pain in your chest I'm the honest con artist...
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NicoleJames1997
Poem Published
15th Jun 2014 10:39pm
15th Jun 2014 10:39pm
Bullying
I have never been so quite before all this happened.
The bullys standing in my way, pushing me to my death.
Why should another human make another human feel suicidal.
It should not be like this.
Am sick of the scars and the crying why should I do this to myself.
You call so many horribel names it makes me unwanted.
You say am too fat.
You say am to skinny.
You say am not cool.
You say am not pretty
Then you spread it around school and post it online to the whloe world to see.
I'm sick of the rumors and the name calling everyday.
And I wanna...
The bullys standing in my way, pushing me to my death.
Why should another human make another human feel suicidal.
It should not be like this.
Am sick of the scars and the crying why should I do this to myself.
You call so many horribel names it makes me unwanted.
You say am too fat.
You say am to skinny.
You say am not cool.
You say am not pretty
Then you spread it around school and post it online to the whloe world to see.
I'm sick of the rumors and the name calling everyday.
And I wanna...
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CarrionCrow44
Poem Published
12th Jun 2014 1:32am
12th Jun 2014 1:32am
Had Dreams
Saw my father
In all that dark and cold
Somewhere on a mountain range
Carrying that fire
He was ahead of me
Didn't look back or say one word
Busy swaying in the wind
Then I woke up
Overmatched
Can't reason with it
Fingers pressing the trigger
Feel outdone
Thought it would ease
Ain't nothing has changed since
On an alcohol high
Was when I made my bones
Shot that boy right through his lung
Didn't feel a damn thing
I recall a medicine man
Who rode with us near Tennessee
He foresaw his own...
In all that dark and cold
Somewhere on a mountain range
Carrying that fire
He was ahead of me
Didn't look back or say one word
Busy swaying in the wind
Then I woke up
Overmatched
Can't reason with it
Fingers pressing the trigger
Feel outdone
Thought it would ease
Ain't nothing has changed since
On an alcohol high
Was when I made my bones
Shot that boy right through his lung
Didn't feel a damn thing
I recall a medicine man
Who rode with us near Tennessee
He foresaw his own...
65 reads
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