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k1551ng5c4r5
Poem Published
21st Jul 2014 8:58pm
21st Jul 2014 8:58pm
Track 5 - This Will Linger
I won't wrap up my thoughts
about you,
but maybe i'll wrap up the joke i am,
thinking i'll win your heart.
i'll go back to crying in the corner,
but still i'll be waiting for you
any day,
any where,
any time.
oh look at the mess you've made
to me.
but it's alright, don't mind me,
i'll clean it up if you'd like.
as long as i know you're okay,
i'm okay.
but to never hear or see of you again,
i'll die never okay
sooner than later.
...
This will linger.
about you,
but maybe i'll wrap up the joke i am,
thinking i'll win your heart.
i'll go back to crying in the corner,
but still i'll be waiting for you
any day,
any where,
any time.
oh look at the mess you've made
to me.
but it's alright, don't mind me,
i'll clean it up if you'd like.
as long as i know you're okay,
i'm okay.
but to never hear or see of you again,
i'll die never okay
sooner than later.
...
This will linger.
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k1551ng5c4r5
Poem Published
20th Jul 2014 8:10am
20th Jul 2014 8:10am
Track 2 - Shining knights and healing scars
I was crying
To the end of the world
'Cos I knew you would
Never be mine
I know you're shattered, and falling
Down to your knees.
And I wanna be the one
To save you from those tears.
Please darling don't be shy
Let me be your shining knight
Someday you'll be a shining star
But for now please let me heal your scars.
I will love you like I do
But even more 'cos I care about you
I know you think that I'm crazy
but darling you never fail to amaze me.
To the end of the world
'Cos I knew you would
Never be mine
I know you're shattered, and falling
Down to your knees.
And I wanna be the one
To save you from those tears.
Please darling don't be shy
Let me be your shining knight
Someday you'll be a shining star
But for now please let me heal your scars.
I will love you like I do
But even more 'cos I care about you
I know you think that I'm crazy
but darling you never fail to amaze me.
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CarrionCrow44
Poem Published
18th Jul 2014 9:12am
18th Jul 2014 9:12am
The End of Things
Vision fading fast
Feels like I'm falling to sleep
Don't know if I should cry or behave
Guess I'll do both
I'm scared of it
Almost forgot the feeling
I've been detached a little too long
Couldn't stop myself
Inflicting pain is like second nature
I wish for no one to succeed
As hateful as I am
I'm scared of it
Almost forgot the feeling
I've been detached a little too long
We're the end of things
Terror that will never be seen again
I think your dying old friend
Hurts like no other
I'm scared of it...
Feels like I'm falling to sleep
Don't know if I should cry or behave
Guess I'll do both
I'm scared of it
Almost forgot the feeling
I've been detached a little too long
Couldn't stop myself
Inflicting pain is like second nature
I wish for no one to succeed
As hateful as I am
I'm scared of it
Almost forgot the feeling
I've been detached a little too long
We're the end of things
Terror that will never be seen again
I think your dying old friend
Hurts like no other
I'm scared of it...
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CarrionCrow44
Poem Published
14th Jul 2014 5:03am
14th Jul 2014 5:03am
No More
Ah, you arrived
I'm so thrilled these days
Don't have a friend to call my own
Missed you boy
No one else will compare
I've been waiting a long time now
No more, I said no more
No more, I said no more
Raised you well
All my men laying dead
Should have kept my head down
Lay down my gun
I trust you won't shoot me
Cause after all your no backstabber
No more, I said no more
No more, I said no more
Not the guts brother
Jesus, tell me I'm dreaming
Your bullet scraping around my...
I'm so thrilled these days
Don't have a friend to call my own
Missed you boy
No one else will compare
I've been waiting a long time now
No more, I said no more
No more, I said no more
Raised you well
All my men laying dead
Should have kept my head down
Lay down my gun
I trust you won't shoot me
Cause after all your no backstabber
No more, I said no more
No more, I said no more
Not the guts brother
Jesus, tell me I'm dreaming
Your bullet scraping around my...
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knifesalesmen
Poem Published
13th Jul 2014 4:36pm
13th Jul 2014 4:36pm
How I fell in love with my friend's shoe.
Recently, I've been drawn to the fading blues.
Tragically I've been chosen to worship a God not worth talking to.
Blast from the past, and I'm wearing a stranger's coat
I am awake, but Jesus Christ, do I wish I wasn't.
I'll live alone and cough up my kidneys while watching the last season of How I Met Your Mother.
People often forget to count their blessings,
But I count my cigarettes every day.
My girlfriend doesn't even know me anymore
Tragically I've been chosen to worship a God not worth talking to.
Blast from the past, and I'm wearing a stranger's coat
I am awake, but Jesus Christ, do I wish I wasn't.
I'll live alone and cough up my kidneys while watching the last season of How I Met Your Mother.
People often forget to count their blessings,
But I count my cigarettes every day.
My girlfriend doesn't even know me anymore
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CarrionCrow44
Poem Published
12th Jul 2014 6:44am
12th Jul 2014 6:44am
The Road to Seeder Hollow
Sitting by a fire
He feels a phantom pain
Like a lesser evil within the limb
Heart like a drum
Clicking along and within
Doubts and fears are coming alive
Days are numbered
The shock breaks the mirror
Like little gray hairs upon your head
Can't outrun destiny
Warrior tribes
And a psycho up ahead
Fate seems to be easily amused
Passing towns
Taking life on the way
He softly said enough is enough
Days are numbered
The shock breaks the mirror
Like little gray hairs upon your head
Can't outrun...
He feels a phantom pain
Like a lesser evil within the limb
Heart like a drum
Clicking along and within
Doubts and fears are coming alive
Days are numbered
The shock breaks the mirror
Like little gray hairs upon your head
Can't outrun destiny
Warrior tribes
And a psycho up ahead
Fate seems to be easily amused
Passing towns
Taking life on the way
He softly said enough is enough
Days are numbered
The shock breaks the mirror
Like little gray hairs upon your head
Can't outrun...
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MorbidEternity
Poem Published
9th Jul 2014 9:04pm
9th Jul 2014 9:04pm
Forever
Across the world blows a gentle breeze.
Taken a life, to set it free.
Tears they flood with disbelief.
You left this world, and took a part of me.
I find that the sun in my world has gone.
Not set, but left for infinite years to come.
The clouds they shrivel into specs of dust.
You're better off in hands of fate, in this I place my trust.
Back to years of fighting off the pain.
With you my heart had no restraints.
Your love was strong, with or without fame.
You made me who I am, you played...
Taken a life, to set it free.
Tears they flood with disbelief.
You left this world, and took a part of me.
I find that the sun in my world has gone.
Not set, but left for infinite years to come.
The clouds they shrivel into specs of dust.
You're better off in hands of fate, in this I place my trust.
Back to years of fighting off the pain.
With you my heart had no restraints.
Your love was strong, with or without fame.
You made me who I am, you played...
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lyricalpoem5
Poem Published
9th Jul 2014 00:45am
9th Jul 2014 00:45am
Angry with you song
You don't really count me in your life (makes me angry with you, you)
Unless I ask
I wonder how long "we" will last (got me frustrated with you)
You don't really wanna commit 5 minutes of your time
When I wanna to talk to you, yeah, yeah
And all you do is make an excuse out of something else (why?)
You say you love me
But it seems that you don't really need me (is this a lie?)
Unless it's for comfort (oh my)
I don't really see you trying the effort unless you prove it to me
Prove it to me, yeah prove it.
Chorus: ...
Unless I ask
I wonder how long "we" will last (got me frustrated with you)
You don't really wanna commit 5 minutes of your time
When I wanna to talk to you, yeah, yeah
And all you do is make an excuse out of something else (why?)
You say you love me
But it seems that you don't really need me (is this a lie?)
Unless it's for comfort (oh my)
I don't really see you trying the effort unless you prove it to me
Prove it to me, yeah prove it.
Chorus: ...
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Ophelia
Poem Published
7th Jul 2014 10:12am
7th Jul 2014 10:12am
Neck Kisses
Let my love bleed
let me leave my lipstick on your neck
Let me wrap my hands around your neck
Now it’s your turn, boy
Let my love die
Pull my hair and bite my neck
Hit me and whisper you love me
Stay with me till the morning
And I will take my clothes off
And my body is on fire
And your neck kisses are so earthly
Yet so heavenly
Because it’s irespressible passion
Let my love burn
Let me hit your head with a gun
Let me smack your neck
Now it’s your turn, boy
Let my love drown
Swallow my howling tears...
let me leave my lipstick on your neck
Let me wrap my hands around your neck
Now it’s your turn, boy
Let my love die
Pull my hair and bite my neck
Hit me and whisper you love me
Stay with me till the morning
And I will take my clothes off
And my body is on fire
And your neck kisses are so earthly
Yet so heavenly
Because it’s irespressible passion
Let my love burn
Let me hit your head with a gun
Let me smack your neck
Now it’s your turn, boy
Let my love drown
Swallow my howling tears...
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Ophelia
Poem Published
7th Jul 2014 10:01am
7th Jul 2014 10:01am
Black Gold
You died too young
Your angels' voice
Your deep deep sorrow
Don't you know how I need you?
You left too soon
Your wicked heart
Yourdrunk drunk love
Don't you know how I need you?
You are from the black gold era
Black is for your melancholy
Gold is for your inexpressible soul
You said goodbye too young
Your golden tears in the paradise
Your rousing heartbreak
Don't you know how I need you?
You passed away too soon
Your mysterious disappearance
Your breathless dream brother
Don't you know how I need you?...
Your angels' voice
Your deep deep sorrow
Don't you know how I need you?
You left too soon
Your wicked heart
Yourdrunk drunk love
Don't you know how I need you?
You are from the black gold era
Black is for your melancholy
Gold is for your inexpressible soul
You said goodbye too young
Your golden tears in the paradise
Your rousing heartbreak
Don't you know how I need you?
You passed away too soon
Your mysterious disappearance
Your breathless dream brother
Don't you know how I need you?...
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CarrionCrow44
Poem Published
7th Jul 2014 4:11am
7th Jul 2014 4:11am
He Answered Back
I chose to carry a gun
You can't salvage anything from me
Never knew a settling man
Only scalp myself
Why follow you
No future where I'm going
Only have a kill contract to deliver
I belong to them
To find my own revelation
Maybe I can pull the devil out of me
That's the truth
I work better on my own
Digging two graves is the endgame
I chose to carry a gun
You can't salvage anything from me
Never knew a settling man
Only scalp myself
No safe passage
He damn well crippled me
Must be divine irony...
You can't salvage anything from me
Never knew a settling man
Only scalp myself
Why follow you
No future where I'm going
Only have a kill contract to deliver
I belong to them
To find my own revelation
Maybe I can pull the devil out of me
That's the truth
I work better on my own
Digging two graves is the endgame
I chose to carry a gun
You can't salvage anything from me
Never knew a settling man
Only scalp myself
No safe passage
He damn well crippled me
Must be divine irony...
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mrbaker
Poem Published
6th Jul 2014 00:15am
6th Jul 2014 00:15am
my hand
i go walking to the river my heart in my hand
i go walking to the river my heart in my hand
waiting for this darkness to fade
lay down in this bed that i’ve made
i had you once
i had every chance
i had all the love a man could stand
right here in the palm of my hand
in my hand
my hand
i swear you were the only one
i swore you were the only one
let the river come and take me down
down down without a sound
i had you once
i had every chance
i had all the love a man could stand ...
i go walking to the river my heart in my hand
waiting for this darkness to fade
lay down in this bed that i’ve made
i had you once
i had every chance
i had all the love a man could stand
right here in the palm of my hand
in my hand
my hand
i swear you were the only one
i swore you were the only one
let the river come and take me down
down down without a sound
i had you once
i had every chance
i had all the love a man could stand ...
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