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Scared Girl
Hey hey
Pretty girls
Why are you so scared
I'm friends with your girlfriend
What are you lesbians
Boom she hits me(just kidding)
Chorus
Tell me what's on your mind
Getting bothered and slightly moving
With your mean face, I hope I dont upset you
Are you near(are you near)
Hey hey
Pretty girls
Why are you so scared
I can tell at times
I can be the biggest jerk/cunt
At your face
Believe it or not my home is broken
So is yours
That's why I'm hanging out with your friend
I'm friends with your...
Pretty girls
Why are you so scared
I'm friends with your girlfriend
What are you lesbians
Boom she hits me(just kidding)
Chorus
Tell me what's on your mind
Getting bothered and slightly moving
With your mean face, I hope I dont upset you
Are you near(are you near)
Hey hey
Pretty girls
Why are you so scared
I can tell at times
I can be the biggest jerk/cunt
At your face
Believe it or not my home is broken
So is yours
That's why I'm hanging out with your friend
I'm friends with your...
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You Are Still Mine
Just a kid coming back from school
As I got home
On a bright sunny friday
Wearing my winter coat
Heard the news about you in the drive way
Felt like my ears have started to bleed
And the ache in my heart was ruled out
By the sudden realization of the present
Truth be told
How I was looking forward to meet you
I feel you in my heart all the time
And I guess it's fine
Cause afterall you are still mine
The clouds above me makes it easier to remember you
Just as the seconds passed by
I thought i had grown old now
The...
As I got home
On a bright sunny friday
Wearing my winter coat
Heard the news about you in the drive way
Felt like my ears have started to bleed
And the ache in my heart was ruled out
By the sudden realization of the present
Truth be told
How I was looking forward to meet you
I feel you in my heart all the time
And I guess it's fine
Cause afterall you are still mine
The clouds above me makes it easier to remember you
Just as the seconds passed by
I thought i had grown old now
The...
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Last Roots Upon
Show me your disguise
And I will fade away
Am I just another puppet of ur excuse
Show me your disguise
And I'll hold on too u
Gone away
TO A BETTER LIFE
THIS IS OUR BABY
GONE TOO A BETTER LIFE
NOT OF SICKNESS
CHRIST WILL BE WITH U
Christ will be with u
And I know u will hate me
Show me your disguise
And I'll have the chance to thank u as I'm sick
(Cut off these ties)
I WISH U WELL
Show me your disguise
And I'll hold on too u
TO A BETTER LIFE
THIS IS OUR BABY
GONE TOO A...
And I will fade away
Am I just another puppet of ur excuse
Show me your disguise
And I'll hold on too u
Gone away
TO A BETTER LIFE
THIS IS OUR BABY
GONE TOO A BETTER LIFE
NOT OF SICKNESS
CHRIST WILL BE WITH U
Christ will be with u
And I know u will hate me
Show me your disguise
And I'll have the chance to thank u as I'm sick
(Cut off these ties)
I WISH U WELL
Show me your disguise
And I'll hold on too u
TO A BETTER LIFE
THIS IS OUR BABY
GONE TOO A...
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Die From The Water
You can die from the water down here, they say.
I don’t care, I know I’m dying anyway.
I felt the fire go out a long time ago.
I want to feel the wind before the time I gotta go.
Nothing here matters but you and me.
We can fly with the eagle, we can drift out to sea.
I know I talk too much, I can’t walk, I can’t stumble.
The truth of my life is a barely heard mumble.
I lust want to live another day.
I just want to live another way.
I don’t know where I’m from, but it ain’t around here.
I’ll sing this song for you, Baby, then it’s...
I don’t care, I know I’m dying anyway.
I felt the fire go out a long time ago.
I want to feel the wind before the time I gotta go.
Nothing here matters but you and me.
We can fly with the eagle, we can drift out to sea.
I know I talk too much, I can’t walk, I can’t stumble.
The truth of my life is a barely heard mumble.
I lust want to live another day.
I just want to live another way.
I don’t know where I’m from, but it ain’t around here.
I’ll sing this song for you, Baby, then it’s...
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That Song Comes On
verse 1-
hey i'm a happy
life of the party type of person
looking at me
you'd never know i'd been hurting
i smile like there ain't nothing that got me down
hey ask anyone around
but
chorus-
that song comes on
and i remember that you're gone
my memory has been able to forget
just about everything
when it comes to you and me
i know i'll be ok
as long as that band dont sing
the one about a girl so deep in love
man it tears me up
any other day
i'm just fine
i get by alright
but i remember that you're gone...
hey i'm a happy
life of the party type of person
looking at me
you'd never know i'd been hurting
i smile like there ain't nothing that got me down
hey ask anyone around
but
chorus-
that song comes on
and i remember that you're gone
my memory has been able to forget
just about everything
when it comes to you and me
i know i'll be ok
as long as that band dont sing
the one about a girl so deep in love
man it tears me up
any other day
i'm just fine
i get by alright
but i remember that you're gone...
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Satan Is The Bulge In My Wrestling Tights
I object
To the effect of letting myself
Getting hot under the collar
Tropical
As you try to resurrect yourselves
Within the arena of my forum topic
Yawl in this pitiful pilgrimage
Trying to remake yourself in God's image
Seeing it fit
To hoot 'n' holler your lyrical nonsense
Taking well deserved licks
Is the righteous atop their crucifixes
Can't make a decision
Sitting on the fence
Split
Torn between which cheek to turn
In a fit of weakness
Like moneychangers who never learn
These tables for two
I...
To the effect of letting myself
Getting hot under the collar
Tropical
As you try to resurrect yourselves
Within the arena of my forum topic
Yawl in this pitiful pilgrimage
Trying to remake yourself in God's image
Seeing it fit
To hoot 'n' holler your lyrical nonsense
Taking well deserved licks
Is the righteous atop their crucifixes
Can't make a decision
Sitting on the fence
Split
Torn between which cheek to turn
In a fit of weakness
Like moneychangers who never learn
These tables for two
I...
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True Why won't they let me kill myself, when I clearly don't wanna live anymore because this world and the people I thou
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Of Twin Towers Sleepers(Lasting Love) pt.Expression
I am an assassin
I am a swordsman
Wh shed blood
Over war-torn hearts
So don't fall
Don't fall
Chorus
I am a leaderx2
I am an assassin
I am a swordsman
Under his name
The one who watches over us
Confront me
Face to Face
To let all of me go.......
We shed blood
(For so many years)
With all the blades in a flurry
Into the mind within(we splitting apart)
How much longer(will it ever take for u to see)
Of Twin Towers Sleepers(Lasting Love)x3
Chorus
I AM WRATH
I AM HATRED...
I am a swordsman
Wh shed blood
Over war-torn hearts
So don't fall
Don't fall
Chorus
I am a leaderx2
I am an assassin
I am a swordsman
Under his name
The one who watches over us
Confront me
Face to Face
To let all of me go.......
We shed blood
(For so many years)
With all the blades in a flurry
Into the mind within(we splitting apart)
How much longer(will it ever take for u to see)
Of Twin Towers Sleepers(Lasting Love)x3
Chorus
I AM WRATH
I AM HATRED...
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Endure
How long will I endurrrrre
will I endure, Endure this pain forrrrrrrr
Cause' I don't want to care, no not anymorrrrrreee
This pain is the only thing of which I'm sure
I refuse to believe this is fate
Losing myself through the cracks
Only a human can teach a heart to hate
Innocents contains what our soul lacks..
Just take me home, take me home....
I don't believe this is God's hand
For we doom our selfs down the road
the horror which I can't withstand
A path so cold...
Just take me home just take me home!
How long will I...
will I endure, Endure this pain forrrrrrrr
Cause' I don't want to care, no not anymorrrrrreee
This pain is the only thing of which I'm sure
I refuse to believe this is fate
Losing myself through the cracks
Only a human can teach a heart to hate
Innocents contains what our soul lacks..
Just take me home, take me home....
I don't believe this is God's hand
For we doom our selfs down the road
the horror which I can't withstand
A path so cold...
Just take me home just take me home!
How long will I...
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insane (for competition Rap game)
Insane
Suicidal call, I hit play with a sling
Trajectory into goliath, no need for a ring
You thought it was a bate? blind folk
Trite of old stories buried in your cold
If i got a hook on this track, I'll kill y'all
The big man's demise is enough to see you off
Shephered crowned king, poet insane rapper
Throw my sheep clothens, I'm a wolf in
disguise
The fox, a big squirrel, a doom for the wise
Cautious of vulgar, but Im harsh like vinegar
I've got wings, I need no weed or cigar
Maybe volumes are insane, but my blood is
venom
So...
Suicidal call, I hit play with a sling
Trajectory into goliath, no need for a ring
You thought it was a bate? blind folk
Trite of old stories buried in your cold
If i got a hook on this track, I'll kill y'all
The big man's demise is enough to see you off
Shephered crowned king, poet insane rapper
Throw my sheep clothens, I'm a wolf in
disguise
The fox, a big squirrel, a doom for the wise
Cautious of vulgar, but Im harsh like vinegar
I've got wings, I need no weed or cigar
Maybe volumes are insane, but my blood is
venom
So...
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9th Speculation/3rd Bonus Song, Living Halloween(Holidays Special)
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I Don't Miss You
It's killing me inside
You are miles away from me
Living your life in the city of dreams
It kills me even more
To watch you make new friends
While you left me here for the dead
Everything was said and done by you
But you never really heard what I have got to say
I can never tell you anything now
Because you are someone i don't recognise anymore
You had to go and it's okay
I don't miss you
I don't miss you
I don't miss you
Only thing i miss is the old you
And I don't really know who you are now
It's just so hard to see you...
You are miles away from me
Living your life in the city of dreams
It kills me even more
To watch you make new friends
While you left me here for the dead
Everything was said and done by you
But you never really heard what I have got to say
I can never tell you anything now
Because you are someone i don't recognise anymore
You had to go and it's okay
I don't miss you
I don't miss you
I don't miss you
Only thing i miss is the old you
And I don't really know who you are now
It's just so hard to see you...
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