Poems About Rhyming Seeking Honest Critique
#rhyming
Spanker
Poem Published
20th Jul 2014 1:24pm
20th Jul 2014 1:24pm
Butterfly & Bee
He offered imperfection
And said it was for free
I settled for deception
Knew he wouldn’t see
He could have if he wanted
But his eyes were just for me
I found it quite confronting
Yet chose not to break free
Then he went and spoiled it
I wished he’d let me be
But he was such an idiot
And worried that I’d flee
He makes pretty music
Lives in big old tree
Thinks I maybe magic
I butterfly - him bee
And said it was for free
I settled for deception
Knew he wouldn’t see
He could have if he wanted
But his eyes were just for me
I found it quite confronting
Yet chose not to break free
Then he went and spoiled it
I wished he’d let me be
But he was such an idiot
And worried that I’d flee
He makes pretty music
Lives in big old tree
Thinks I maybe magic
I butterfly - him bee
#relationships
#butterfly
#rhyming #bees
#rhyming #bees
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staggerlee
Poem Published
16th Dec 2013 7:33pm
16th Dec 2013 7:33pm
THE BEST POEM EVER WRITTEN
i don't think i'm egomaniac
but this wilL be the best poem ever written
it's gonna be epic
forget your kubla khan's
and wordsworth's insufferable daffodils
swaying in the wind
this will blow your fucking mind
better than whiskey and coke combined
change your perspective
take you to higher plain
make you the de la lama of the soul
so get me my paper fetch me my pen
it's time to start it's time to begin
aaaahhh no aaaahhh fuck
i haven't a clue i'm completely stuck
but this wilL be the best poem ever written
it's gonna be epic
forget your kubla khan's
and wordsworth's insufferable daffodils
swaying in the wind
this will blow your fucking mind
better than whiskey and coke combined
change your perspective
take you to higher plain
make you the de la lama of the soul
so get me my paper fetch me my pen
it's time to start it's time to begin
aaaahhh no aaaahhh fuck
i haven't a clue i'm completely stuck
#rhyming
#funny
#WritersBlock #WritingPoetry
#WritersBlock #WritingPoetry
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2 Comments
BleedingRoses
Poem Published
29th Oct 2013 8:01pm
29th Oct 2013 8:01pm
Seed of Kindness
Listen to me closely
As I speak what must be spoken
It’s a knowledge we all contain
The silence has finally been broken
Open your eyes
Look around, what do you see?
I see misery, torture everywhere
And anywhere it could possibly be
There is hope
I also see a light
A light to lead the way
It shines so bright
No, it is not God’s light
Or any religious sphere
It’s just a light that reflects
The kindness of a person near
Not just anyone
Can fashion a light so bright
Only one distinctly pure
Who wishes...
As I speak what must be spoken
It’s a knowledge we all contain
The silence has finally been broken
Open your eyes
Look around, what do you see?
I see misery, torture everywhere
And anywhere it could possibly be
There is hope
I also see a light
A light to lead the way
It shines so bright
No, it is not God’s light
Or any religious sphere
It’s just a light that reflects
The kindness of a person near
Not just anyone
Can fashion a light so bright
Only one distinctly pure
Who wishes...
#kindness
#hope
#inspirational
#rhyming
#uplifting
93 reads
4 Comments
fred_r_kane
fred r kane
fred r kane
Poem Published
18th Jun 2013 3:34am
18th Jun 2013 3:34am
MKULTRA : white rat perspective
One day I went and placed myself in danger;
it's a trip I had to take to see the edge.
Though madness and I were never strangers,
I always knew I'm quick enough to just be dead.
Voices said:
“I am you,
you are mine.”
A cold equation: one for many is no crime.
“I am you.
You are mine.”
All things given may be taken in due time.
They numbered me, then ground my lens to prisms:
drug induced. All patterned reasoning collides
with unfocused noise: a mental vandalism.
I seek the spectrum ordered highway I can ride.
Voices...
it's a trip I had to take to see the edge.
Though madness and I were never strangers,
I always knew I'm quick enough to just be dead.
Voices said:
“I am you,
you are mine.”
A cold equation: one for many is no crime.
“I am you.
You are mine.”
All things given may be taken in due time.
They numbered me, then ground my lens to prisms:
drug induced. All patterned reasoning collides
with unfocused noise: a mental vandalism.
I seek the spectrum ordered highway I can ride.
Voices...
#rhyming
#dark
125 reads
1 Comment
the_unheard
aftermath
aftermath
Poem Published
28th Oct 2012 5:58pm
28th Oct 2012 5:58pm
jade
im fallin away.
ive broken through pain.
and now nothing remains.
but my feeling of jade.
im breaking out, breaking down.
im rising up, falling down.
im dancing with death.
im so manically depressed.
sense and reason are sensless.
bloody mary is my princess.
im OCD about darkness.
im braindead and thoughtless.
lets let the smoke rise.
im screaming my last breath.
im a victim of my lawlessness.
im gonna serenade before i confess.
im cursed before im blessed.
stop the beating in my chest,
and let me float...
ive broken through pain.
and now nothing remains.
but my feeling of jade.
im breaking out, breaking down.
im rising up, falling down.
im dancing with death.
im so manically depressed.
sense and reason are sensless.
bloody mary is my princess.
im OCD about darkness.
im braindead and thoughtless.
lets let the smoke rise.
im screaming my last breath.
im a victim of my lawlessness.
im gonna serenade before i confess.
im cursed before im blessed.
stop the beating in my chest,
and let me float...
#depression
#rhyming
#myself
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BigVirge
Poem Published
28th Oct 2012 00:52am
28th Oct 2012 00:52am
"What's in a Word ... ???" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 20/12/2004
So …. what's in a word ?
Well a word like F**K
can possibly mean …. ? ….
you've run out of luck ...!!!..
Now a word like …”LOVE”…
gives ... “HATRED” ... A … SHOVE … !!!!!
and can ELEVATE you ….
to the sky with the … “THE DOVES” …
The words we use
can be …. “BEAUTY” …. filled …
like an evening when ….
The ... “Chardonnay’s” … “Chilled” …
or .... the day that ....
your ….. Lifetime …
Ambition's …. “FULFILLED” ….
But … this word ….
…… “KILLED” ……
means … NEEDLESS...
Well a word like F**K
can possibly mean …. ? ….
you've run out of luck ...!!!..
Now a word like …”LOVE”…
gives ... “HATRED” ... A … SHOVE … !!!!!
and can ELEVATE you ….
to the sky with the … “THE DOVES” …
The words we use
can be …. “BEAUTY” …. filled …
like an evening when ….
The ... “Chardonnay’s” … “Chilled” …
or .... the day that ....
your ….. Lifetime …
Ambition's …. “FULFILLED” ….
But … this word ….
…… “KILLED” ……
means … NEEDLESS...
#rhyming
#WritingPoetry
#PowerOfWords
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Diviy
Poem Published
10th Oct 2012 6:34am
10th Oct 2012 6:34am
Somewhere...over some rainbow.
Rainbows seem so far away,
Unicorns just cannot be real,
For every unicorn would be hunted,
And there would be to much gold to steal,
Fairytales can never exist,
Because fairies don't have tails,
No wolf will sit there lurking,
As you picks flowers behind the trails,
There are no shoes made of glass,
To cut and tear your feet,
No true love's kiss to awaken,
A curse that makes you sleep,
So is it really to hard to understand,
Why I want you to stay,
When unicorns will never exist,
And rainbows seem so far away?
Unicorns just cannot be real,
For every unicorn would be hunted,
And there would be to much gold to steal,
Fairytales can never exist,
Because fairies don't have tails,
No wolf will sit there lurking,
As you picks flowers behind the trails,
There are no shoes made of glass,
To cut and tear your feet,
No true love's kiss to awaken,
A curse that makes you sleep,
So is it really to hard to understand,
Why I want you to stay,
When unicorns will never exist,
And rainbows seem so far away?
#relationships
#rainbow
#unicorns #rhyming
#unicorns #rhyming
141 reads
3 Comments
Ambiotic
Poem Published
23rd Jul 2012 6:36pm
23rd Jul 2012 6:36pm
Morality Lost
At this point, our conscience weeps
Boundaries vanish and integrity sleeps
Promises torn and loyalty broken
A touch misplaced, and words unspoken
A step from the enclosed, into the vast
That once seen, is placed in the past
Speak forever now, but never another
A moment we share with only each other
Here now, not knowing the cost
At this point, our morality is lost
Boundaries vanish and integrity sleeps
Promises torn and loyalty broken
A touch misplaced, and words unspoken
A step from the enclosed, into the vast
That once seen, is placed in the past
Speak forever now, but never another
A moment we share with only each other
Here now, not knowing the cost
At this point, our morality is lost
#relationships
#betrayal
#rhyming #disappointment
#rhyming #disappointment
129 reads
2 Comments
jdrury245
Tav
Tav
Poem Published
12th Apr 2012 3:56pm
12th Apr 2012 3:56pm
Playful Sister
I am up, the house is still
Even after I have already taken the pill
It is here I write perfect forms with a modern quill
streams of light fill
and distill the dark passages at will
the ribbons finally reached my poet mill
where I read countless works from my till
until the silence is broken by a sound as loud as a drill
with a giggle from my sister Jill
Even after I have already taken the pill
It is here I write perfect forms with a modern quill
streams of light fill
and distill the dark passages at will
the ribbons finally reached my poet mill
where I read countless works from my till
until the silence is broken by a sound as loud as a drill
with a giggle from my sister Jill
#sister
#rhyming
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mysticmaze
Poem Published
11th Apr 2012 4:26pm
11th Apr 2012 4:26pm
Sweet decay
Separation drives healing,
Intuition rides over feeling,
Destruction comes only from building.
we can repair wounds as long as were willing.
Silence forces self reflection.
we must see thy self to make a correction.
discomfort then proves itself as perfection.
climb the mountains to feel this connection.
curiosity now drives, the real me is dead.
rational wisdom lost footing in my head.
accepting death as the gift of life.
I decay in peace as I close my eyes.
Intuition rides over feeling,
Destruction comes only from building.
we can repair wounds as long as were willing.
Silence forces self reflection.
we must see thy self to make a correction.
discomfort then proves itself as perfection.
climb the mountains to feel this connection.
curiosity now drives, the real me is dead.
rational wisdom lost footing in my head.
accepting death as the gift of life.
I decay in peace as I close my eyes.
#spiritual
#rhyming
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a-nase
TheStalker
TheStalker
Poem Published
21st Jul 2011 11:37pm
21st Jul 2011 11:37pm
*BREAKING NEWS*
Switching to BBC1 at 6 ‘o’ clock
I find nothing but dead men
Hacking phones
Death threats
Olympics killing zones
Stockbrokers broke
Gaddafi stubborn
A nurse who killed
An 84 year old woman
Somalia in poverty
Greece without money
And the weather girl saying
It’s not going to be sunny
The latest sports
Without Andy’s thoughts
And boring cricket
With something about wickets
I’ll press the power button
On this transmitter
But that doesn’t stop
Shit on Facebook and Twitter
I don’t know how
I’m still awake...
I find nothing but dead men
Hacking phones
Death threats
Olympics killing zones
Stockbrokers broke
Gaddafi stubborn
A nurse who killed
An 84 year old woman
Somalia in poverty
Greece without money
And the weather girl saying
It’s not going to be sunny
The latest sports
Without Andy’s thoughts
And boring cricket
With something about wickets
I’ll press the power button
On this transmitter
But that doesn’t stop
Shit on Facebook and Twitter
I don’t know how
I’m still awake...
#rhyming
#TruthOfLife
#escape
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Gg78
let it be
let it be
Poem Published
16th Mar 2011 3:05am
16th Mar 2011 3:05am
Just for fun
Being a poet isn't easy to do
You have to know about sonnets
Maybe even the color blue
I remember the days when it was all a rhyme like
Roses are red violets are blue
Rhyming is sweet and so are you
Those days are gone
Poems are now like songs
There beautiful and deep
You must comprehend
Or you'll get lost in the poem
Trying to understand
Lol just bored
You have to know about sonnets
Maybe even the color blue
I remember the days when it was all a rhyme like
Roses are red violets are blue
Rhyming is sweet and so are you
Those days are gone
Poems are now like songs
There beautiful and deep
You must comprehend
Or you'll get lost in the poem
Trying to understand
Lol just bored
#beauty
#rhyming
#sonnet
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
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