Poems About Courage Seeking Honest Critique
#courage
Poems about courage seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
The Kill
I don't like to think of dying
But what if your arms could kill?
What if all my insecurities could be gone in a flash
Fears washed away in an instant
All at the power of
Your touch
Would you go for it?
What if your embrace contains the secret ingredient
To all that I'm missing
And have never quite been able to find
If I knew
I'd let it stir in my mind
But I would remain still
Moved by you
Deeply, too
But not enough
To really follow where you lead
Because I'm afraid of what you see
So when you come around
I...
But what if your arms could kill?
What if all my insecurities could be gone in a flash
Fears washed away in an instant
All at the power of
Your touch
Would you go for it?
What if your embrace contains the secret ingredient
To all that I'm missing
And have never quite been able to find
If I knew
I'd let it stir in my mind
But I would remain still
Moved by you
Deeply, too
But not enough
To really follow where you lead
Because I'm afraid of what you see
So when you come around
I...
#strength
#rejection
#courage #science
#courage #science
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Choices
I don't know what she's doing with me
She's beautiful and I'm
Well let's be honest I'm not
But she looks at me
And she holds me
And she kisses me
Like I'm the only person
That she has ever wanted
The only person she will ever want
And really I just want to know
Why?
Why would she ever choose me?
And she did
She chose me
Before I chose her
She chose me
I hope I can be worth it.
She's beautiful and I'm
Well let's be honest I'm not
But she looks at me
And she holds me
And she kisses me
Like I'm the only person
That she has ever wanted
The only person she will ever want
And really I just want to know
Why?
Why would she ever choose me?
And she did
She chose me
Before I chose her
She chose me
I hope I can be worth it.
#rejection
#courage
#dark
#husband
#conflict
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me and puppy are on the same page
#rejection
#courage
#children
#soldiers
#conflict
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Fear Itself
Fear is speaking in your voice,
trying to fool me.
I say, Fear, I know you.
You can't hide under that mask of love.
True love has a special look
in her eye,
that is infinitely patient
and wise.
I say, Fear, I would know you
even at a masquerade.
I would know you even if
you wore the clothes of all the people I love.
I would know you even if
you hid in my own heart
Even if you were hiding in my own heart
where I am the most blinded.
I say, Fear, you don't need to hide anymore.
I recognise you.
You have been a...
trying to fool me.
I say, Fear, I know you.
You can't hide under that mask of love.
True love has a special look
in her eye,
that is infinitely patient
and wise.
I say, Fear, I would know you
even at a masquerade.
I would know you even if
you wore the clothes of all the people I love.
I would know you even if
you hid in my own heart
Even if you were hiding in my own heart
where I am the most blinded.
I say, Fear, you don't need to hide anymore.
I recognise you.
You have been a...
#strength
#courage
#inspirational
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House of Moving Trees
The forest is dark today
Dare I make some light?
Dare I move some shadows
And make room for right?
I hear a creaking near the entrance
A thumping near the pool
A muted scream by the river
And scratching across the floor
The forest is dark today
Yet something scuttles in the underbrush
Trying to escape, run away
Trying to breathe with a muted hush
I see circles of trees marching inward
A branch reaching near the caves
A root extending over the precipice
And stretching across the crag
The forest is...
Dare I make some light?
Dare I move some shadows
And make room for right?
I hear a creaking near the entrance
A thumping near the pool
A muted scream by the river
And scratching across the floor
The forest is dark today
Yet something scuttles in the underbrush
Trying to escape, run away
Trying to breathe with a muted hush
I see circles of trees marching inward
A branch reaching near the caves
A root extending over the precipice
And stretching across the crag
The forest is...
#courage
#dark
#nature
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lion vs fish
Looking into the fires eye
my heart is beating
with every fear of emotion I fly
the breeze effects me
fluttering like a flame
no water insight
only myself to blame
find the strength from the fire
the one that determines my direction
feel the warmth inside
as the two elements collide
balancing the two opposites
ying and yang I face myself
the fish and the lion as one
two different worlds have begun
the sun and the moon
creating beauty so soon
my heart is beating
with every fear of emotion I fly
the breeze effects me
fluttering like a flame
no water insight
only myself to blame
find the strength from the fire
the one that determines my direction
feel the warmth inside
as the two elements collide
balancing the two opposites
ying and yang I face myself
the fish and the lion as one
two different worlds have begun
the sun and the moon
creating beauty so soon
#courage
#identity
#inspirational
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spirit of the wolf
In your heart lays a spirit
of a fearless wolf
Curious,Peaceful
Beautiful & Free
A spirit often misunderstood
as intimidating and dangerous
Is the spirit which is courageous
and lets you have the ability
to dance in the clouds
where uniqueness lays.
of a fearless wolf
Curious,Peaceful
Beautiful & Free
A spirit often misunderstood
as intimidating and dangerous
Is the spirit which is courageous
and lets you have the ability
to dance in the clouds
where uniqueness lays.
#strength
#courage
#identity #misunderstood
#identity #misunderstood
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