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I am who I am
I will be judged on what I look like
Freckles, fair skin, skinny, short, hazel eyes, wide smile
I will be judged on what I feel
Anger, happiness, sadness, pain, excitement
I will be judged on who I am
Christian, loving, strong willed,
I will be judged on what I do
Explore, create, read, color, hang with family
I will be judged until the day I die,
You may not like me, oh well
I am who I am and I love it
Freckles, fair skin, skinny, short, hazel eyes, wide smile
I will be judged on what I feel
Anger, happiness, sadness, pain, excitement
I will be judged on who I am
Christian, loving, strong willed,
I will be judged on what I do
Explore, create, read, color, hang with family
I will be judged until the day I die,
You may not like me, oh well
I am who I am and I love it
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Re: I am who I am
4th Apr 2013 6:53am
Very deep. Never let anyones words get to you. I've been a victim of that already. You are strong and awesome. You are who you are. Well written.
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4th Apr 2013 6:54am
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4th Apr 2013 10:03pm
Re: I am who I am
5th Apr 2013 4:03am
what i learned from this poem:
I'll be free
I'll be me
I'll go where i wanna see
awesome poem
I'll be free
I'll be me
I'll go where i wanna see
awesome poem
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Re: I am who I am
5th May 2013 11:39pm
Dang there's a lot of comments! And it's no wonder why when you have such a powerful message delivered in such a calm voice. I'm often intimidated by large readings, so I didn't read the other comments, but I personally loved it!
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5th May 2013 11:40pm
Re: I am who I am
8th May 2013 6:40pm
Always Be who you are and never change for anybody.Very nice and sweet poem it is.
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17th May 2013 7:39pm
Re: I am who I am
23rd May 2013 3:19pm
Sounds very angry - but anger fuels passion and that's very good. I like it!
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Re: I am who I am
If I may be so bold as to extend this to a metaphor, we all are judge on in someway. Most of us will make a pay check that us tied to someone judging our efforts. Athletes, musicians, teachers, students, and even our pets get into make judgments. As Dylan said in one of his best songs, "You Gotta Serve Somebody".
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