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She is...
She holds truth beneath color
though her view is sometimes grey
Seeing what escapes others
feeds the struggle to remain
Intrigued by her style
it captures my eye
Her wit extracts laughter
a gift rare to find
Vision,imbued with creativity
Intellect,able to fill endless sky
Still I'm saddened by her self portrait
for it fail's to convey,all that's special inside
A quirky heart of gold
that envelops sorrow,from insight
I hope one day she finds substance
to replace what's become devoid in her life
though her view is sometimes grey
Seeing what escapes others
feeds the struggle to remain
Intrigued by her style
it captures my eye
Her wit extracts laughter
a gift rare to find
Vision,imbued with creativity
Intellect,able to fill endless sky
Still I'm saddened by her self portrait
for it fail's to convey,all that's special inside
A quirky heart of gold
that envelops sorrow,from insight
I hope one day she finds substance
to replace what's become devoid in her life
Published 2nd Apr 2013
| Edited 12th Jul 2013
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3rd Apr 2013 4:58am
Thanks again...This person is quite special to me,as you can tell. =).She has some struggle's in life.As most do.Both were inspired by her.
3rd Apr 2013 5:21am
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
24th Apr 2013 2:59am
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Definitely part of what I was trying to get across,and I'm sure you,like her,are amazing.So try not to be so hard on yourself.It's just not worth it.Life's to short.
'Course,I can't even take my own advice half the time so' :)
Thank's for reading
'Course,I can't even take my own advice half the time so' :)
Thank's for reading
6th Jul 2013 9:07am
Aww...
Such Beauty in these words!
I can really can relate.
This is my fave Stanza:
"A quirky heart of gold
That envelop's sorrow,from insight
I hope one day she find's substance
To replace what's become devoid in her life"
Such Beauty in these words!
I can really can relate.
This is my fave Stanza:
"A quirky heart of gold
That envelop's sorrow,from insight
I hope one day she find's substance
To replace what's become devoid in her life"
6th Jul 2013 9:38am
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Jun 2018 7:37pm
12th Jul 2013 7:39am
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12th Jul 2013 7:43am
That's really cool to hear.I'm new at this,and your writing is amazing.So it's a great compliment.
Thanks so much for reading...
Thanks so much for reading...