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Fix You
I've been holding my breath
I'm a weird shade of blue
Coldplay on repeat
I will try to fix you
With my lack of air
I slip into a dream
Not trying to fight it
This suffocations serene
It's just me and you alone in a room
You're behind a microphone
Me sitting facing you
You sing that song to me
Whisper it right into my ear
I gasp for a breath,
While I reach out to touch you
The image of you vanishes
I'm tossed back into reality
As my color returns
My heads still kinda cloudy
Then I hear my song again
I'm too in love to let you go
Baby please come back to me
And I will try to fix you
I'm a weird shade of blue
Coldplay on repeat
I will try to fix you
With my lack of air
I slip into a dream
Not trying to fight it
This suffocations serene
It's just me and you alone in a room
You're behind a microphone
Me sitting facing you
You sing that song to me
Whisper it right into my ear
I gasp for a breath,
While I reach out to touch you
The image of you vanishes
I'm tossed back into reality
As my color returns
My heads still kinda cloudy
Then I hear my song again
I'm too in love to let you go
Baby please come back to me
And I will try to fix you
Published 2nd Apr 2013
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
2nd Apr 2013 10:28pm
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2nd Apr 2013 10:46pm
very very nice...I'm feeling that "coldplay on repeat...clocks is my melody...i love the suffering in this...breathe again...
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
2nd Apr 2013 11:03pm
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3rd Apr 2013 1:51am
5th Apr 2013 00:22am
16th Sep 2013 8:43pm
sounds like the loss of someone you love whom you wish you can have return to you so you can make things right for that person. something about the simplicity in this poem moved me struck a chord.
