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Eventide
Eventide drains sky-blue watercolours off the
atmospheres worn canvas and into his box of Genesis.
I explore under scatterings of night-lights,
curious footprints marking the end of time.
Earth forces a tempered smile as I
dye the air bright with practiced ease,
imagination held harmless at bay once again.
Meanwhile, the Unknown drill their attack plan
into unearthly sly-minded creations.
In the unlit with doubt ruling the shadows
I shoot risks down dead, experience as bullets.
Secreted by darkness I dance a broken silhouette,
thundering silences chanting hope steadily.
"I am alive, I am alive, I am alive".
atmospheres worn canvas and into his box of Genesis.
I explore under scatterings of night-lights,
curious footprints marking the end of time.
Earth forces a tempered smile as I
dye the air bright with practiced ease,
imagination held harmless at bay once again.
Meanwhile, the Unknown drill their attack plan
into unearthly sly-minded creations.
In the unlit with doubt ruling the shadows
I shoot risks down dead, experience as bullets.
Secreted by darkness I dance a broken silhouette,
thundering silences chanting hope steadily.
"I am alive, I am alive, I am alive".
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Re: Eventide
2nd Apr 2013 9:59pm
I like the title, been a long time since I even thought of that, evening never sounded so calm as it does with eventide.
strong poem from start to finish
I especially like the last stanza,
strong words Scribbler :)
strong poem from start to finish
I especially like the last stanza,
strong words Scribbler :)
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Re: Eventide
2nd Apr 2013 11:00pm
This is one of the reasons why I worked the night shift for so many years. Quite the stage you set, and some things never change, thankfully. Wonderful work here.
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Re: Eventide
3rd Apr 2013 00:04am
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 7:37pm
3rd Apr 2013 00:22am
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Re: Eventide
Anonymous
3rd Apr 2013 3:28am
SUBLIME with some AMAZING added to it! LOVED! xoxo
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Anonymous
- Edited 12th Jul 2018 3:39am
3rd Apr 2013 8:47am
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 00:09am
3rd Apr 2013 9:47am
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 9:39pm
3rd Apr 2013 11:24am
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Re: Eventide
3rd Apr 2013 4:24pm
this was a neat write:)
and well Eventide always makes me think of music...(theres a company called that...makes my favorite effects racks) the last stanza was the punch!!!
and well Eventide always makes me think of music...(theres a company called that...makes my favorite effects racks) the last stanza was the punch!!!
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re: Re: Eventide
3rd Apr 2013 4:33pm
Re: Eventide
3rd Apr 2013 7:46pm
I shoot risk down dead experience as bullets, a very deep line their scribbler loved every word in this poem.
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Re: Eventide
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Jun 2019 9:40pm
5th Apr 2013 2:20pm
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