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Solitude
On a desert island
Faraway
Where nothing grows
But a single palm tree
Beneath, a single mat
There lays solitude
Bathed golden by the sun
Soaking the rays
Into the sand
And at times
Sucking in coldness
Of the buffeting wind
Yes there stay
Solitude
An invisible sentinel
gazing sightless
towards the horizon
How lonely it must be
To be a sentinel
Of the sea...
Faraway
Where nothing grows
But a single palm tree
Beneath, a single mat
There lays solitude
Bathed golden by the sun
Soaking the rays
Into the sand
And at times
Sucking in coldness
Of the buffeting wind
Yes there stay
Solitude
An invisible sentinel
gazing sightless
towards the horizon
How lonely it must be
To be a sentinel
Of the sea...
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27th Mar 2013 11:32am
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- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
27th Mar 2013 11:44am
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re: Re: Solitude
27th Mar 2013 1:30pm
Dear Magdalena, thank you so much for reading and commenting...always so kind.
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Re: Solitude
27th Mar 2013 1:09pm
How lonely it must be
To be a sentinel
Of the sea...
It must...
A wondeful Painting Dear Grace...
Good Luck in the comp!!!
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27th Mar 2013 1:31pm
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27th Mar 2013 3:27pm
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27th Mar 2013 7:09pm
Re: Solitude
27th Mar 2013 3:52pm
An ideal idyll for Easter [Island] and touches all those parts that we living in a cold climate love touched. Send us a turtle and a Tutu and we will all be surfin in on the next Palm D'Or
which your poem deserves.
which your poem deserves.
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27th Mar 2013 7:14pm
Thank you kind sir, for reading and leaving your encouraging comments. A tutu'd turtle it is.
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Re: Solitude
29th Mar 2013 1:11am
A powerful poem, Grace, and quite evocative of the mood of a mysterious and desolate island off in the midst of the sea someplace! Quality work, as always, my dear friend. :)
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29th Mar 2013 2:07am
Thank you dear Jessica...that desert island, wish I knew what it is. sometimes solitude helps to calm the chaotic mind. Thanks dear for being here.
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