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Lilac in Spring
Relaxing on our porch,
mind?
Not at all
but ablaze
unfolding
scents of Lavender,
wafting from the page
Sharing this
She smiled, saying
Save that for me, I wish to walk
amongst Deer and stream
Talking, as we walked
discussions upon knowledge
which are real, which are thought
Deck to the trails
trickling, surrender
dancing Butterflies
wings these holding hands,
sipping
Ice cooled lemon tea
We graze upon laughs
Sparkling stars,
falling out of our pockets
kicking stones out of the path
twinkling eyes, we pick them up,
cup in our hands, save the dust
all shiny and new
Kept for the nights
When things look gloom
we dance, to lights passion
we play, on the stage
When the night carries day
Woods upon acres
Lilac in the air
mountains start to move
and spring,
It
does
sing
Paths to the moon
Leaves that turn green
And the season begins
Perfectly Persephone
mind?
Not at all
but ablaze
unfolding
scents of Lavender,
wafting from the page
Sharing this
She smiled, saying
Save that for me, I wish to walk
amongst Deer and stream
Talking, as we walked
discussions upon knowledge
which are real, which are thought
Deck to the trails
trickling, surrender
dancing Butterflies
wings these holding hands,
sipping
Ice cooled lemon tea
We graze upon laughs
Sparkling stars,
falling out of our pockets
kicking stones out of the path
twinkling eyes, we pick them up,
cup in our hands, save the dust
all shiny and new
Kept for the nights
When things look gloom
we dance, to lights passion
we play, on the stage
When the night carries day
Woods upon acres
Lilac in the air
mountains start to move
and spring,
It
does
sing
Paths to the moon
Leaves that turn green
And the season begins
Perfectly Persephone
Published 25th Mar 2013
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25th Mar 2013 6:14pm
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25th Mar 2013 6:24pm
Thank You Dear Magdalena, means a lot.
True a shame that can be, but dreams hope of wonderments magic can never die within me, as roads always lead me to it, If the day ever comes i let it, I will die. lucky enough that magics find me, in many different ways. Hold faith within Yours, for You are brimming with it!!!
True a shame that can be, but dreams hope of wonderments magic can never die within me, as roads always lead me to it, If the day ever comes i let it, I will die. lucky enough that magics find me, in many different ways. Hold faith within Yours, for You are brimming with it!!!
25th Mar 2013 7:36pm
A very soothing piece with such vivid descriptions that you can see in your minds eye and smell the wafting ghost scents your imagination has created, well done!
Red
Red
25th Mar 2013 9:11pm
Thank You for the read and such kind words Red!!!
Very Much appreciated!!!
Very Much appreciated!!!
25th Mar 2013 7:39pm
Impressive.
Not at all
but ablaze
unfolding
scents of Lavender,
wafting from the page
May seem like a strange word to
use to describe this part, but I
choose 'fragrant'.
The rest of the poem rings magical.
Not at all
but ablaze
unfolding
scents of Lavender,
wafting from the page
May seem like a strange word to
use to describe this part, but I
choose 'fragrant'.
The rest of the poem rings magical.
25th Mar 2013 9:13pm
25th Mar 2013 8:45pm
Spring will always come after the stark winter and the flowers will bloom. A poem written from the soul indeed. Good read Soul.
25th Mar 2013 9:15pm
Indeed SO TRUE My Dear Grace, I thank You so much for Your kind words, Deeply humbled!!!
26th Mar 2013 4:06am
A fitting poem to welcome the new season coming out of hiatus from a deep slumber...it's still winter in my niche of the woods though, as snow falls today.
As a nature lover, I enjoyed reading your poem as it takes me to your world so vividly.
As a nature lover, I enjoyed reading your poem as it takes me to your world so vividly.
26th Mar 2013 4:15am
Thank You so much Engr. for dropping by:)
appreciate the kind words, Ahhh spring...She's trying and well on Her way snow or not!!!
appreciate the kind words, Ahhh spring...She's trying and well on Her way snow or not!!!
26th Mar 2013 5:28pm
Such a serene piece, Soulman, with terrific images like "Deck to the trails trickling, surrender dancing Butterflies" and "Sparkling stars, falling out of our pockets." You do my favorite season justice in this beautiful poem. Very nice!
26th Mar 2013 5:35pm
Anonymous
30th Mar 2013 10:38pm
I love how your words dance from the page!
Truly a beautifully written piece!;)
Truly a beautifully written piece!;)
31st Mar 2013 00:49am