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Conversations With The Mind - What is the reason for why?
Mysteriously walking into the shadows
Hallowed out from my own psyche searching for a key
When in the distance is freedom
Too easy
Perfectionism isn't in the dictionary of imperfect
Problematic in the way we distract with no time to react
Hope the sun rises soon
A tree is gently talking to the wind
Every human has sinned
Wash my hands as someone pours water over their head
Destruction is the key to rebuilding
There is a light flickering in an alley
How Far?
Are we here for the sentence we were served
or are we here to serve what we were sentenced?
Blank
Promises of nothing
Why is there a why?
Sky lightens a little
Heart drops a little
Why do we hurt each other..
Crazy men in the ways of crazy women that destroy the craziness
I'm lost in Hiroshima in 1945
I'm found in a third world country with nothing
I'm dead in america with everything
I'm home
Hallowed out from my own psyche searching for a key
When in the distance is freedom
Too easy
Perfectionism isn't in the dictionary of imperfect
Problematic in the way we distract with no time to react
Hope the sun rises soon
A tree is gently talking to the wind
Every human has sinned
Wash my hands as someone pours water over their head
Destruction is the key to rebuilding
There is a light flickering in an alley
How Far?
Are we here for the sentence we were served
or are we here to serve what we were sentenced?
Blank
Promises of nothing
Why is there a why?
Sky lightens a little
Heart drops a little
Why do we hurt each other..
Crazy men in the ways of crazy women that destroy the craziness
I'm lost in Hiroshima in 1945
I'm found in a third world country with nothing
I'm dead in america with everything
I'm home
Published 21st Sep 2010
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21st Sep 2010 10:21pm
i like some of the subjects you touched on, but i feel you were all over the place with your ideas and it didn't quite form a cohesive full piece.
"Destruction is the key to rebuilding"
good line, but out of context much as some of the others
"Destruction is the key to rebuilding"
good line, but out of context much as some of the others
27th Sep 2010 1:53am
thanks for the feedback and if you read the other set for these(i dont know if you did or not) its thoughts inside my head, no on ever stays on a subject perfectly and that was what i'm aiming for, out of the ordinary
