life is your captor

I like the way this piece plays out. With death being a shining hero and life a cold heartless bitch, ain't that the truth. An honest poem in such a short format, yet the point of it hit like a bullseye. great piece.

lol thank you  :)

it was actually originally VERY long but i reread it and decided to try a more short and to the point version :3

I like the thought of death being so predictable and ultimate, whereas life is random and generally likes to screw you over. Great write!

thank you... i just really feel thats how it is lol a lot of people fear death and i think people see it the wrong way... i see death as our escape from a hellish life... even people with "good" lives go through hell...

Well Miss ScreamYourHeartOut this def was a pleasure to read...I for one agree with you 100% and i have  a poem to prove it.. life is that uncle or aunt that do random things to piss you off were as death is that grandma or grandda giving you everything you need to simply be at peace.. lol thanks for sharing this was a pleasure to read

lolololoz :) thank you

I'm really enjoying reading your work. I tend to write poetry on the dark or melancholy side, as well. You're a very gifted writer ! I just joined the site, but I have a link on my profile to my blog, where I have over fifty poems published. I'll get some on here soon. Thank you and keep up the good work !!.... JEFF

thank you and ill checkthem out :)

Very well written. I love how you gave life to death and life. I like your written. Your gofted with words. Keep up the work and thank you.

thank you very much :)