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Pour Away The Ocean
You come in waves
but its okay
I need the break
swimmingly beautiful
until,
high water hit
driftwood dreams
washed ashore
bound and tied
an ocean of secrets,
now sea glass sparkles
in someone else's bay
the wreckage of shallow hearts
sink slowly,
to the bottom
the stars of truth, begin to shine
on this darkened heart of mine,
as I slip calmly into the drink.......
but its okay
I need the break
swimmingly beautiful
until,
high water hit
driftwood dreams
washed ashore
bound and tied
an ocean of secrets,
now sea glass sparkles
in someone else's bay
the wreckage of shallow hearts
sink slowly,
to the bottom
the stars of truth, begin to shine
on this darkened heart of mine,
as I slip calmly into the drink.......
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Re: Pour Away The Ocean
19th Mar 2013 3:37pm
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Jun 2019 9:40pm
19th Mar 2013 3:48pm
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19th Mar 2013 3:49pm
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19th Mar 2013 4:31pm
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19th Mar 2013 6:27pm
woo,baby...lovelove it
yr talkin my beachBum
lingua,
sweetdear.....
wish ye was here
yr talkin my beachBum
lingua,
sweetdear.....
wish ye was here
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19th Mar 2013 8:02pm
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19th Mar 2013 7:22pm
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19th Mar 2013 8:03pm
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19th Mar 2013 8:18pm
Re: Pour Away The Ocean
19th Mar 2013 8:34pm
Stunning poem, swept me away.
Powerful descriptions, there's
a magic in simplicity and you
brought it to life here.
Powerful descriptions, there's
a magic in simplicity and you
brought it to life here.
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20th Mar 2013 4:43pm
Re: Pour Away The Ocean
19th Mar 2013 11:40pm
Great job! A simple refreshing read, feelings, tides, ties us to the sea as emotional beings. Thank you! Mike
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20th Mar 2013 4:44pm
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21st Mar 2013 4:53pm
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21st Mar 2013 6:23pm