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For Me
I have something of your's
It's not in my pocket
It's not in either hand
It's not your gold locket
Or your lost silver band.
It's nothing you can see
Nothing anyone can feel
It's something just for me
It's something I had to steal,
Want to know what I stole?
It's actually a couple of things!
I gave you despair and woe
As I took your hopes and dreams.
It's not in my pocket
It's not in either hand
It's not your gold locket
Or your lost silver band.
It's nothing you can see
Nothing anyone can feel
It's something just for me
It's something I had to steal,
Want to know what I stole?
It's actually a couple of things!
I gave you despair and woe
As I took your hopes and dreams.
Published 18th Mar 2013
| Edited 19th Mar 2013
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:03pm
18th Mar 2013 12:56pm
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18th Mar 2013 4:22pm
Thanks! I agree with you that it could do without the way I ended it. Wasn't the best way to do it. While creating the poem last night, was tired, sensed it needed more, then thought to hell with it, and ended it that way. Going to change it now. :)
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 5:43pm
11th Jun 2013 5:00pm
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12th Jun 2013 5:30am
Yeah, I guess that I do like adding a twist to the end of a lot of my poem's. :)
2nd Jul 2014 6:23am
