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KISS
when lips
meet lips
in intimate kiss
whether lovers
or strangers
sweet eloquence
of feelings
both primal
and rich
expressed though
without words
alchemically slips
from triggered
minds to
flow directly
through dancing
tongues intertwined
in their
warm wet
slippery moves
in the torque
the glide
the slippery slide
of their
in sync
erotic sweeps
of sweet
oral making love
where time
elapses
without measure
far from
any thoughts
of ever wanting
to stop
at all
temporarily lost
in the
brief eternity
of pure
raw pleasure
within their
sensual fusion
of hormonal
and physical
harmonious union
through their
coming together
whether by
choice or
random opportunity
to spontaneously
conjoin
in each ripe
moment
their inner fires
as one
Published 17th Mar 2013
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- Edited 11th Jun 2019 9:40pm
17th Mar 2013 9:09am
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17th Mar 2013 10:40pm
Thanks Kasupuu, I only found this D.U.site & became a member yesterday & am still only just now getting a gradual feel for how to particpate in it. I haven't yet found enough time to have filled out my profile, but hope to before too long, as I just saw here a minute ago, by the sites accounting, that my profile has been checked out by 15 members since last night! (the pressure seems to be on!!!). I've been checking out other poets poems on here as well & the ones of yours I've read are among the relatively few I've most enjoyed - so far, so I'll continue to check out & resonantly tune into your ongoing offerings as they arise & surface here. It feels kind of like we are each & all an integral part of some great, mysterious, creatively expressive, flowing & thunderously rumbling (at times!)river of never-ending words & diversely overlapping worlds; so much fun, I only wish I had found this site years ago!!!
18th Mar 2013 00:13am
18th Mar 2013 5:00am
Thanks for your response & welcome to DU Atakti, in my now 2 days exploration of DU's ever-expanding, diverse terrain of inspired & free-flow, creative expression from so many poets whose words I've still not yet had time enough to discover & breathe through my own receptive, creative being, of the thirty or so I've checked out & read so far, whose works initially drew me into them & inspired me to read more, your poems (of the only ten or so I've now read)consistently stood out in their dynamic resonance with me, quite beyond all I've read from the rest of the 'pack' (so far), some of whose poems were also somewhat engaging, but in their own individual, but far less dynamic (for lack of a better word) ways. I look forward to reading many more of the poems you've already posted & those that have yet to come from you, as well as whatever other unexpected surprises & uniquely inspired voices I sense I most likely will discover here on D.U. in time!
18th Mar 2013 6:29am