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Hearts Entwined
When two hearts lovingly entwined
are cleaved down the middle,
It is impossible for either soul
to leave the other still whole.
Both leave part of their being in the other's embrace
and themselves with raw wounds.
And each keeps a piece of the other forever
because to part with it is too painful to bear.
are cleaved down the middle,
It is impossible for either soul
to leave the other still whole.
Both leave part of their being in the other's embrace
and themselves with raw wounds.
And each keeps a piece of the other forever
because to part with it is too painful to bear.
Published 17th Sep 2010
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10th Dec 2010 7:53am
For quite sometime I have written on the subject which reflects on ma work and I have even written a poem called Entwined. I am hereby inviting you to read the same also. So far as your work, it is mature and i don't think that you are here for window shopping. I would like to read some more serious poetic stuff from you. But for the begining this is good work. I have liked the way you have used the title as hearts entwined which treats the contents in a very sublime way.
