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If You Were Mine
girl i see the way those fools keep breaking your heart
like its some kind of game
oh they must be insane
to let someone like you get away
you deserve nothing but the best
i swear you're better then the rest
oh
if you were mine
i'd treat you like a queen
you'd be my everything
i'd show you everyday
just how amazing you are
all you gotta say
is you want to take a chance
girl we could have a real romance
i swear if you were mine
i'd never let you go
i'd show
you in every way
it'd be for the rest of time
baby if you were mine
you start to doubt yourself
your intelligence
and your beauty
but if you were to look at me, you'd see right through me
hey they didnt know what they had
and yeah this might sound bad
but i'm glad
cuz you dont deserve to be treated like that
oh
if you were mine
i'd treat you like a queen
you'd be my everything
i'd show you everyday
just how amazing you are
all you gotta say
is you want to take a chance
girl we could have a real romance
i swear if you were mine
i'd never let you go
i'd show
you in every way
it'd be for the rest of time
baby if you were mine
baby dont give up on love
its closer than you think
oh look up and dont blink
cuz i'm standing right in front of you
tell me what you want to do
oh
if you were mine
i'd treat you like a queen
you'd be my everything
i'd show you everyday
just how amazing you are
all you gotta say
is you want to take a chance
girl we could have a real romance
i swear if you were mine
i'd never let you go
i'd show
you in every way
it'd be for the rest of time
baby if you were mine
like its some kind of game
oh they must be insane
to let someone like you get away
you deserve nothing but the best
i swear you're better then the rest
oh
if you were mine
i'd treat you like a queen
you'd be my everything
i'd show you everyday
just how amazing you are
all you gotta say
is you want to take a chance
girl we could have a real romance
i swear if you were mine
i'd never let you go
i'd show
you in every way
it'd be for the rest of time
baby if you were mine
you start to doubt yourself
your intelligence
and your beauty
but if you were to look at me, you'd see right through me
hey they didnt know what they had
and yeah this might sound bad
but i'm glad
cuz you dont deserve to be treated like that
oh
if you were mine
i'd treat you like a queen
you'd be my everything
i'd show you everyday
just how amazing you are
all you gotta say
is you want to take a chance
girl we could have a real romance
i swear if you were mine
i'd never let you go
i'd show
you in every way
it'd be for the rest of time
baby if you were mine
baby dont give up on love
its closer than you think
oh look up and dont blink
cuz i'm standing right in front of you
tell me what you want to do
oh
if you were mine
i'd treat you like a queen
you'd be my everything
i'd show you everyday
just how amazing you are
all you gotta say
is you want to take a chance
girl we could have a real romance
i swear if you were mine
i'd never let you go
i'd show
you in every way
it'd be for the rest of time
baby if you were mine
Published 14th Mar 2013
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- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
14th Mar 2013 6:44pm
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14th Mar 2013 7:44pm
See, now, this is what I'm talking about. This is why I started looking at poetry sites. I'm an amateur musician (indie)looking for a lyricist or simply lyrics to put into my music, or to build into songs.
Would you mind my turning this into a song, (not that you would like what I'd do with it musically), or may it be okay to ask you to look at my youtube site and peruse the instrumentals?
Would you mind my turning this into a song, (not that you would like what I'd do with it musically), or may it be okay to ask you to look at my youtube site and peruse the instrumentals?
15th Mar 2013 00:38am
okay, so I thought these were lyrics looking for music, and i'm wrong, I admit it.
15th Mar 2013 2:20am
what? they are lyrics. and you can put music to them if you want, as long as i get credit
16th Mar 2013 10:58pm
Of course I would. You wrote them, yes?
I might have to do some rearranging, but
yeah, there's some cool lines/verses/chorus here. Thank you.
How should I credit you, and would you prefer I
send what I've done with it to you first, for your
approval? I could create a youtube site, post it as
private, send you the code, and you can watch it,
and then respond telling me you approve or not.
I might have to do some rearranging, but
yeah, there's some cool lines/verses/chorus here. Thank you.
How should I credit you, and would you prefer I
send what I've done with it to you first, for your
approval? I could create a youtube site, post it as
private, send you the code, and you can watch it,
and then respond telling me you approve or not.
16th Mar 2013 11:41pm
21st Mar 2013 00:25am
Well, then, I'll let you know,
once I get time to work on it,
(spring cleaning, you know?)
and get it done.
Thank you.
once I get time to work on it,
(spring cleaning, you know?)
and get it done.
Thank you.
21st Mar 2013 2:45am
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