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The Undoing
Tremulous fingers uncertain
a momentary hesitation
a steeling breath in
silken straps
g l i d e
off delicate
sunkissed shoulders
The shift
like his eyes
travel
d
o
w
n
w
a
r
d
puddle
a gossamer pool
at her high-heeled feet
He licks his lips in anticipation
hungry for the taste of her
She smiles shyly
ever the coquette
all innocence and pink-tinged flesh
now led away to temptation
He silently wonders at her ability
to make him so hard
she smiles knowingly
Why do they always
make it so damn easy?
a momentary hesitation
a steeling breath in
silken straps
g l i d e
off delicate
sunkissed shoulders
The shift
like his eyes
travel
d
o
w
n
w
a
r
d
puddle
a gossamer pool
at her high-heeled feet
He licks his lips in anticipation
hungry for the taste of her
She smiles shyly
ever the coquette
all innocence and pink-tinged flesh
now led away to temptation
He silently wonders at her ability
to make him so hard
she smiles knowingly
Why do they always
make it so damn easy?
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- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
12th Mar 2013 00:30am
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Re: The Undoing
12th Mar 2013 1:33am
M'lady -
In seduction as in all other forms of "hand to hand combat" the first rule is to "know and understand your opponent" I bow to a master --I mean poet of course --
Sir Muse
In seduction as in all other forms of "hand to hand combat" the first rule is to "know and understand your opponent" I bow to a master --I mean poet of course --
Sir Muse
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12th Mar 2013 4:36pm
Re: The Undoing
12th Mar 2013 6:54am
Seductive write - like the way you wrote 'Downwards'. Most elegant description of the undies coming down.
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12th Mar 2013 4:39pm
thanks Solomon. I do like to play round with font and format, unfortunately DUP does not have a very advanced system for doing this, and I am stifled by my lack of expertise in this area. Hopefully, I will get it figured out someday, and will e able to format my poems the way I see them.
lola
lola
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
12th Mar 2013 8:46am
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Re: The Undoing
Anonymous
12th Mar 2013 9:06am
Beautiful descriptions
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12th Mar 2013 4:40pm
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12th Mar 2013 12:23pm
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12th Mar 2013 4:40pm
Re: The Undoing
8th Apr 2013 4:40pm
You have a synopsis of men right there. How to turn a man on? = be there.
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