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Blase Splee
I wanna stop
this madness
of missing you
its kinda lame
it doesn't
happen all the time,
anymore
but sometimes,
like when,
I was stuck
in the snow,
had to walk home
and get a shovel
oh how I missed you
but,
I dug myself out
and I drove
away
I was sitting in the dark
because I couldn't
reach the bulb
I missed you,
ended up
getting a chair
stacking phone books on it,
changing it myself,
let there be light.....
I wiped out,
hard on the ice
I just laughed
it was then I missed you
I wiggled over
to the lamp post
pulled myself up
and went about my day
but today fucking sucked
I think I needed a hug
damn it, I tried giving one to myself
it didn't work
I truly miss you
anger steps in
I punch the wall
and kick the air
I'm the one who left
so, why do I miss you so freaking much?
this madness
of missing you
its kinda lame
it doesn't
happen all the time,
anymore
but sometimes,
like when,
I was stuck
in the snow,
had to walk home
and get a shovel
oh how I missed you
but,
I dug myself out
and I drove
away
I was sitting in the dark
because I couldn't
reach the bulb
I missed you,
ended up
getting a chair
stacking phone books on it,
changing it myself,
let there be light.....
I wiped out,
hard on the ice
I just laughed
it was then I missed you
I wiggled over
to the lamp post
pulled myself up
and went about my day
but today fucking sucked
I think I needed a hug
damn it, I tried giving one to myself
it didn't work
I truly miss you
anger steps in
I punch the wall
and kick the air
I'm the one who left
so, why do I miss you so freaking much?
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Re: Blase Splee
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6th Mar 2013 6:39pm
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6th Mar 2013 8:53pm
Re: Blase Splee
6th Mar 2013 6:57pm
Emotional write as always,
I can feel each inch of frustration
and longing through the words.
:)
I can feel each inch of frustration
and longing through the words.
:)
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Re: Blase Splee
6th Mar 2013 9:55pm
Missing someone is someof the worst aching there is....
Well written My friend.
Fire
Well written My friend.
Fire
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Re: Blase Splee
Anonymous
7th Mar 2013 00:39am
As if you've penned a chapter in my life!I know this feeling all too well!
#hands you a bouquet of celebratory roses ;)
#hands you a bouquet of celebratory roses ;)
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7th Mar 2013 2:38pm
funny how you miss them til you see them, and then you hate them all over again :)
Re: Blase Splee
7th Mar 2013 10:49am
My ex wife could have written this after discovering I wasn't quite "useless" afer all!;-)
Well penned Nikki, more please!
Well penned Nikki, more please!
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7th Mar 2013 2:40pm
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Re: Blase Splee
8th Mar 2013 7:11pm
I like this one too, especially when the character (you?) starts to feel the independance grow within themselves, just my take. Bravo!
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