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Angry death
My mother passed away in a hospital. Bleeding from every organ and body filling with fluid as each moment passed. For a week she was in the hospital unconscious. She was only 64 turning 65. I am only 20 turning 21. My tears were for joy because she had a life with no more illness. Little did I know I'd lose everything. Friends and a dear mother is what I'd lost and I gained financial struggle and sadness. I miss her and want her back. It's been almost 8 months.
Then today my sister died in a car wreck. Car completely dismantled and torn to shreds, she died on impact. She was a breast cancer survivor for 8 years. Why take everything I have away? I feel as though I have no hope in my future. A nobly with no money or a clear standing ground. I wana wake from this dream and be better.
Then today my sister died in a car wreck. Car completely dismantled and torn to shreds, she died on impact. She was a breast cancer survivor for 8 years. Why take everything I have away? I feel as though I have no hope in my future. A nobly with no money or a clear standing ground. I wana wake from this dream and be better.
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Re: Angry death
6th Mar 2013 7:50pm
Wow if this is true my sympathy .
I read it over and over.
All I can say is thank you for sharing.
I read it over and over.
All I can say is thank you for sharing.
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7th Mar 2013 00:16am
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7th Mar 2013 5:08am
im so sorry for your loses :( i hope you find peace writing here in the DUP community. Stay strong.
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7th Mar 2013 5:15am
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7th Mar 2013 5:26am
Thanks so much. It's been very difficult but writing always helps. I'm just not great with rhyming. Everything I write is more of a story. Xo
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7th Mar 2013 7:56am
Wow. Your losses are unimaginable. Writing is medicine, and don't worry about rhyming, just write! All of us have hurt before, it shapes us. I hope this place to emote brings you a little peace. Mike.
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5th May 2013 11:14pm
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5th May 2013 11:35pm
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