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YOU
The passion in your voice...
Your whispers had me
at Hello
Not a moment in my day
escapes without
your rumbling echoes
in my head
I wake
feeling you here
I sleep and the dreams
erupt small tornados
within my soul
I spin and sink
into your embrace
Loving your giggles
whispered across the miles
Feeling your kisses
imprinted on my lips
in my ears
your heartbeat
reverberating through my soul
Sounds of US colliding
breathing together
loving your hand
around my heart
I fall closer to you
than ever before
grasping you tighter
each grip stronger
Breathless
Our essence
one continuous beat
traveling inside of me
Inhale deep
comfort clouds hover over
Us tonight
fiery flame blazes
soaring high above such rare love
Release silence
into peace
listen
soft whisper
gentle beat
of my voice
calling
for
You
Your whispers had me
at Hello
Not a moment in my day
escapes without
your rumbling echoes
in my head
I wake
feeling you here
I sleep and the dreams
erupt small tornados
within my soul
I spin and sink
into your embrace
Loving your giggles
whispered across the miles
Feeling your kisses
imprinted on my lips
in my ears
your heartbeat
reverberating through my soul
Sounds of US colliding
breathing together
loving your hand
around my heart
I fall closer to you
than ever before
grasping you tighter
each grip stronger
Breathless
Our essence
one continuous beat
traveling inside of me
Inhale deep
comfort clouds hover over
Us tonight
fiery flame blazes
soaring high above such rare love
Release silence
into peace
listen
soft whisper
gentle beat
of my voice
calling
for
You
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Re: YOU
4th Mar 2013 3:47pm
This is so romantic and masterfully penned with a powerful delivery. Great love poem, Ken. xo
Faith
Faith
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re: Re: YOU
6th Mar 2013 5:01pm
Thank you, Faith. It is wonderful to be loved and moved as my girl does me
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re: Re: YOU
6th Mar 2013 5:02pm
Re: YOU
4th Mar 2013 4:03pm
Heart-felt piece, Soul man Ken.
Felt a thrum of emotion all the
way through this piece.
This poem felt very calm and serene.
Much enjoyed.
Felt a thrum of emotion all the
way through this piece.
This poem felt very calm and serene.
Much enjoyed.
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re: Re: YOU
6th Mar 2013 5:03pm
Re: YOU
Anonymous
4th Mar 2013 4:43pm
LOVE! This is truly what Im feeling while absorbing each of your words! The behavior of being in LOVE! Emotions on high and steady climbing!
Love this types of read! Relatable indeed!
Expressed with love, Mr Somebody's else's, YOU! :)
Love this types of read! Relatable indeed!
Expressed with love, Mr Somebody's else's, YOU! :)
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re: Re: YOU
6th Mar 2013 5:04pm
Hahaha, how nicely you put that! Thanks, Rain!!
It is love in action... the best part of life!
It is love in action... the best part of life!
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4th Mar 2013 7:05pm
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6th Mar 2013 5:05pm
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7th Mar 2013 10:00am
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4th Mar 2013 7:18pm
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re: Re: YOU
6th Mar 2013 5:05pm
Hey, just letting the toes wiggle and the fingers clickety clack my heart. Thanks!
Re: YOU
5th Mar 2013 00:13am
re: Re: YOU
6th Mar 2013 5:06pm
WOW!
5th Mar 2013 2:50am
I have read this quite a few times, and still can not come up with the words to express how deeply I can relate to this. It is like I can feel your heartbeat with each word. What an incredible piece, and it reads SOOOO wonderfully out loud. Thank you for sharing your heart with us. :)
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re: WOW!
6th Mar 2013 5:08pm
Thank you, Rachel. I don't want to be cheesy or redundant in my attempts to let my heart do the writing. Ever a smile you are!
Re: YOU
It's really romantic and deep, I love the way you can put such an abundance of emotions into words. I love it. Great write,soul man.
<3, Mira
<3, Mira
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6th Mar 2013 5:08pm
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7th Mar 2013 00:15am
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