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The highest bidder
Heaven went up for auction today.
All inhabitants nursed dejection
in the heart of their rib cages;
hastily shedding wings into
the bins provided-thank you.
Satan proudly persists as the
highest bidder, poised scarlet beside
eagle-eyed Gods consumed with fight.
Lightning bolts singe the air,
tsunamis anchored into their hands;
but you mustn't play with fire.
Impatient sparks nip at Time,
chasing down the seconds.
Cupid offers final chances,
"Going once, going twice".
The hammer impacts the wood
with an echoing thud.
"Sold"
All inhabitants nursed dejection
in the heart of their rib cages;
hastily shedding wings into
the bins provided-thank you.
Satan proudly persists as the
highest bidder, poised scarlet beside
eagle-eyed Gods consumed with fight.
Lightning bolts singe the air,
tsunamis anchored into their hands;
but you mustn't play with fire.
Impatient sparks nip at Time,
chasing down the seconds.
Cupid offers final chances,
"Going once, going twice".
The hammer impacts the wood
with an echoing thud.
"Sold"
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1st Mar 2013 8:25pm
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Anonymous
3rd Mar 2013 00:21am
WOW! That was witty and cleverly penned! I was 'sold'on the first line, "Heaven went up for auction today". I was like,... what???!! Let me read slowly! haha...didn't want to miss anything!
LOVED! xo :)
LOVED! xo :)
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3rd Mar 2013 10:56pm
Fascinating! This is a situation I never would have imagined taking place. Your poem seems like a short story - the kind I want to read over and over because of its unusual perspective. And I'm sure I will read it over and over.
Thank you for sharing this!
Thank you for sharing this!
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Re: The highest bidder
6th Mar 2013 8:44pm
Very nice job! Reminds me of the way my own mind works at times, and being able to see things from different perspectives, see the inner workings and mechanics of things. I can totally "see" what's going on in your poem.
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