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Caught A Glimpse of the Past Today
Caught a glimpse of the past today
in my minds eye as I turned around
the sun flashed in my face
and caused me to go blind
I saw the world as it had been
flashing through my head
torturous visions laced my thoughts
and bled into my brain
on a beautiful day, the gray crept in
once again I lost sight of the light
the sun blurred to shadows
And I was forced to grit my teeth
The world was smiling off in the distance
laughs muted by the sound of my thoughts
the day consumed itself and turned inside out
and all of the colors of the world bled to black and white.
in my minds eye as I turned around
the sun flashed in my face
and caused me to go blind
I saw the world as it had been
flashing through my head
torturous visions laced my thoughts
and bled into my brain
on a beautiful day, the gray crept in
once again I lost sight of the light
the sun blurred to shadows
And I was forced to grit my teeth
The world was smiling off in the distance
laughs muted by the sound of my thoughts
the day consumed itself and turned inside out
and all of the colors of the world bled to black and white.
Published 25th Feb 2013
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Anonymous
24th Oct 2013 1:03am
very nicely woven tale. i'd say you got off to a good start
24th Oct 2013 4:27am
14th Nov 2013 3:29pm
I love the way you choose your words. Even as sad as this is, its beautiful to read and to dwell in your mind for a few verses. I'm officially your fan :)
14th Nov 2013 3:57pm