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TREMBLING
Easing all nervousness, A sweet passionate kiss eased our trembling. Teasing our passions further with wine and conversation. Sexy you kick off your pumps too curl pretty toes. Beautiful is our vibe. With a few more tongue wrestling kisses, our clothes melt away. Eager too become one. Physical yolk. A light breeze tips through the window grazing our hot lust filled bodies and the closer we snuggle. Our caressing hands travel all over just missing sweets spots. Panting heavy our breathing becomes. I kiss, nibble and lick my merry way to heaving breasts, nipples of stone. The tongue rolls around and around. biting your bottom lip muffles sweet moans. With desire is how hot, moist tongue eased down between edible thighs. An arch forms from your gorgeous body. Your attention focuses on my tongue licking into sexy you. Upon touch, tummy muscles tighten involuntarily in ecstasy. Pure pleasurable moans ripple from your vocal cords. Angelic. Delicious was the way sweet hips rotated towards passions peak. Squeezing soft thighs over ears, your heart pounds to the rhythm of my excitement. With a generous "OOoooh Fuuuck", your body exploded in an overwhelming orgasm times two. Then a sweet slow grinding aftershock sparks your lovely body and you shudder again. And a sweet passionate kiss on perfect lips, eased your trembling......
Sir Lancelott
Sir Lancelott
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23rd Feb 2013 7:07pm
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23rd Feb 2013 7:29pm
Awwww "Passions peak"! Sweet metaphor to describe a wonderful journey!
awesome pen Pookie!
awesome pen Pookie!
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23rd Feb 2013 7:58pm
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23rd Feb 2013 7:57pm
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23rd Feb 2013 9:58pm
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23rd Feb 2013 10:24pm
I prefer this one to the others of yours I've read so far Lance, it's more understated and refined, less raw. Just my personal preference, but thought I would share my thoughts with you.
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23rd Feb 2013 11:37pm
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23rd Feb 2013 10:33pm
O, MY Knight,
I am more than "Trembling" with anticipated desire after reading thy tender, sensual posting!
Thou art a true master with thy words..and with thy ability to grant such gratifying pleasure, indeed!!
Lancelott,truly thy final line is soo gentle...so touching.
Thou surely knowest how to make a lady feel admired and adored!!
I remain thy loyal sorceress,
Dark Enchantress
I am more than "Trembling" with anticipated desire after reading thy tender, sensual posting!
Thou art a true master with thy words..and with thy ability to grant such gratifying pleasure, indeed!!
Lancelott,truly thy final line is soo gentle...so touching.
Thou surely knowest how to make a lady feel admired and adored!!
I remain thy loyal sorceress,
Dark Enchantress
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23rd Feb 2013 11:38pm
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24th Feb 2013 3:56am
"Eager too become one. Physical yolk"
that was Excellence within style Lance!!!
that was Excellence within style Lance!!!
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24th Feb 2013 4:44am
Thanks Bro. SOUL!!
Your support is amazing!!
You da MAN!!!!!!!!
PEN on!!!!
Your support is amazing!!
You da MAN!!!!!!!!
PEN on!!!!
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24th Feb 2013 6:15am
Re: TREMBLING
24th Feb 2013 5:38am
dang this felt like a roller coaster! Just need a little Maxwell in the cd player!
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24th Feb 2013 6:32am
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24th Feb 2013 7:20am
Re: TREMBLING
25th Feb 2013 12:23pm
Sir Lancelott,
Favourite line.
"And a sweet passionate kiss on perfect lips, eased your trembling......"
Sexy read indeed!!
Olga :-)
Favourite line.
"And a sweet passionate kiss on perfect lips, eased your trembling......"
Sexy read indeed!!
Olga :-)
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26th Feb 2013 00:14am
Re: TREMBLING
25th Feb 2013 3:27pm
so you got me all inspired this morning--your words..sparked my poem.. Reciprocated Trembles..
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26th Feb 2013 00:16am
WOW!!!!
Sweets I'm really Honored and Humbled!!
Thanxx for being extra sweet too me!!!
I'll go right now!!
Sweets I'm really Honored and Humbled!!
Thanxx for being extra sweet too me!!!
I'll go right now!!
Re: TREMBLING
1st Mar 2013 2:48am
Sexy as always...
Squeezing soft thighs over ears, your heart pounds to the rhythm of my excitement. With a generous "OOoooh Fuuuck", your body exploded in an overwhelming orgasm times two. Then a sweet slow grinding aftershock sparks your lovely body and you shudder again. And a sweet passionate kiss on perfect lips, eased your trembling......
I'm loving this;-)
Squeezing soft thighs over ears, your heart pounds to the rhythm of my excitement. With a generous "OOoooh Fuuuck", your body exploded in an overwhelming orgasm times two. Then a sweet slow grinding aftershock sparks your lovely body and you shudder again. And a sweet passionate kiss on perfect lips, eased your trembling......
I'm loving this;-)
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1st Mar 2013 2:47pm
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2nd Mar 2013 12:19pm
Got to say it. Sweet! I love how you never follow the expected patter, nay you veer off and create new phrases and use your imagination and expressive skills uniquely ...bravo sir
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2nd Mar 2013 1:54pm
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4th Mar 2013 2:56pm
Your TREMBLING left me with aftershocks, Lance!
I enjoyed this sensual piece from beginning to end. Thanks for sharing! ;)
I enjoyed this sensual piece from beginning to end. Thanks for sharing! ;)
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4th Mar 2013 3:28pm
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9th Mar 2013 4:51am