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Congenital Insensitivity To Pain
Go ahead, inflict
you're pain upon me
there is nothing
I feel
except sunlight
and its midnight
so
were cool
always laughing
never crying,
he is
causing pain
that is never felt
must be quite daunting
feverishly punching
and kicking
nothing......
you're pain upon me
there is nothing
I feel
except sunlight
and its midnight
so
were cool
always laughing
never crying,
he is
causing pain
that is never felt
must be quite daunting
feverishly punching
and kicking
nothing......
Published 22nd Feb 2013
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22nd Feb 2013 9:34pm
22nd Feb 2013 10:37pm
22nd Feb 2013 11:37pm
yeah ----
true,
that kind of shit is so powerful when it comes from pure
imagination .............
true,
that kind of shit is so powerful when it comes from pure
imagination .............
Anonymous
22nd Feb 2013 11:40pm
Me Like it! Me like it a lot!
Cool freaking title too, with a dope pic to match! xoxo
Cool freaking title too, with a dope pic to match! xoxo
23rd Feb 2013 00:10am
Well 'tricky Nikki' you're so bloody good at putting feeling into your poems it's hard to tell real happenings from imagination. Good pen my friend.
Blessings to ya!
Blessings to ya!
23rd Feb 2013 2:26am
23rd Feb 2013 12:08pm
Sounds kind of like you are taking a whup-ass-fu class or something here. On the upside, it does sound like you are winning...
;)
Uley
;)
Uley
23rd Feb 2013 3:20pm
I like the picture, really represents your poem. The only question I have is: how can pain be afflicted, which I'm really sorry about, "which is never felt?"
24th Feb 2013 2:30am
Vampires have the best taunts.
This one gets me higher and the lunges haunt.
This one gets me higher and the lunges haunt.
