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Patient Love

We Teased
We Laughed
We Fought
We brought Love to each others daily thoughts

The highs were high
And lows were low
But my Love for you
Still always grows

Apart we are
But not for long
We both know
This Love is strong

Now hand in hand
Let's walk this land
And show each other
Love of the highest brand

So many times
I pushed and shoved
But what caught me
Is your Patient Love

Written by Sir-Anton

Published 18th Feb 2013

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- Edited 2nd Sep 2019 11:35pm

20th Feb 2013 8:01am

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Re: Patient Love

Sir-Anton

20th Feb 2013 4:25pm

Hi Al. Thank you for the feed back, I always appreciate it.

Now that I look at it, you are rite that I should have made it 2 words. Although I hate changing any poems I have posted, I will consider sticking to your advice when posting another poem with the same format.

I got a good feeling that i will have fun on this site.

Thanks again.