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Distant Lovers
he can move her
without touch
the way
the faults
move mountains
and lift her
without force
the way
the moon
lifts the seas
and without a single
taste
he craves her
the way
the night craves
the dawn
and though
they've never met
he knows her
the way
the body
knows the soul
without touch
the way
the faults
move mountains
and lift her
without force
the way
the moon
lifts the seas
and without a single
taste
he craves her
the way
the night craves
the dawn
and though
they've never met
he knows her
the way
the body
knows the soul
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Anonymous
- Edited 17th May 2018 11:37am
18th Feb 2013 7:18pm
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18th Feb 2013 9:07pm
Hey, yeah, so true...there are many ways to travel with out moving, for sure...great point.
Thank you much for your kind words.
Thank you much for your kind words.
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18th Feb 2013 7:35pm
I absolutely love how you manage to put so much emotion in such few words, Rachel. This is beautiful.
"the way
the night craves
the dawn"
.... excellent!
"the way
the night craves
the dawn"
.... excellent!
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th Sep 2020 7:37pm
18th Feb 2013 7:53pm
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- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
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19th Feb 2013 2:23am
ahh Rachel me ol' flower,
such words ..pure as the driven snow, don-cha-know. isn't luurve a wondrous thing, makes the sun shine and the birds sing even on the most cloudiest of days :>
great stuff here Rachel.
such words ..pure as the driven snow, don-cha-know. isn't luurve a wondrous thing, makes the sun shine and the birds sing even on the most cloudiest of days :>
great stuff here Rachel.
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19th Feb 2013 7:06am
Yes Eamon, it is true, "luurve" is wondrous and all that other poetic stuff...thanks for stopping by my little corner...means a lot to me! :)
Re: Distant Lovers
19th Feb 2013 12:26pm
We define life with man made terms as time, hours and days and we view distance as something not so good. Every breath we inhale is unique and never repeated. Such is my sense of your piece here. It is great to see you return with such timeless writing.
The beauty of this piece is your ability to aptly pair love with the intrinsic splendor and awe of nature.
A touching entry into your Hallmark Card collection :) lol
The beauty of this piece is your ability to aptly pair love with the intrinsic splendor and awe of nature.
A touching entry into your Hallmark Card collection :) lol
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Anonymous
6th Mar 2013 3:48pm
Beautifully written! A telepathy, telekinesis movement of souls! I know this all too well! Gorgeous Ink! :)
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29th Mar 2013 3:54am
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30th Mar 2013 2:46am
Beautiful write Rachel. Just words alone can stir the souls of many. However having a deep connection with someone will actually move you! Cherish it sweetheart. Thanks for sharing.
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2nd Apr 2013 00:01am
Hey there doc! Your words ring very true. Thank you for stopping by. Truly! :)
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