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Miles Away
you ask where I go
when I get that
far away look in my eyes
and I really have
no answer to give you
I just know
that each time I travel
another mile
comes between us
when I get that
far away look in my eyes
and I really have
no answer to give you
I just know
that each time I travel
another mile
comes between us
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- Edited 15th May 2018 3:45pm
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18th Feb 2013 5:37am
Thank you Queen. I had just copied and pasted from another site, and it formats very differently here. It will take some getting used to!
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18th Feb 2013 6:08am
So few words yet so much said about the relationship between two people. Reminds me a touch of "So Close" by Hall and Oates.
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18th Feb 2013 2:55pm
then be careful---I have found that even some of my closest friends can't stand Hall and Oates.
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18th Feb 2013 3:02pm
LOL! Well, I do remember them, but I can't say as they were ever high on my list of favourites.
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18th Feb 2013 6:36am
Great read- love the form - no punctuation makes it seem immediate like it goes on even after the poem is done- like reading a billboard from a moving car-
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19th Feb 2013 3:28am
Wow sweets, drifting apart from someone..
That's deep...Loosing interest wtf....
Great piece sweets Loved the write and read!!
You give great PEN!!!
Sir Lancelott
That's deep...Loosing interest wtf....
Great piece sweets Loved the write and read!!
You give great PEN!!!
Sir Lancelott
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- Edited 15th May 2018 7:52pm
22nd Feb 2013 3:36pm
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