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waiting for death
They skirt around the topic
play it
like a fucking song
that's stuck
wanting to bring me down
wipe the smile "I mastered to a tee"
off my face
drag these sleepless nights into weeks
and make me scream from the top of my lungs
GET THE FUCK OUT MY HEAD
I'm at a loss for words
cause they are floating around in my
thoughts
holding me hostage
bringing me down
driving me to drink
no one can help me
not a doctor
nor god himself
he can't erase the memories
or take away the pain
I know I feel because I'm alive
so if I die can I finally forget?
play it
like a fucking song
that's stuck
wanting to bring me down
wipe the smile "I mastered to a tee"
off my face
drag these sleepless nights into weeks
and make me scream from the top of my lungs
GET THE FUCK OUT MY HEAD
I'm at a loss for words
cause they are floating around in my
thoughts
holding me hostage
bringing me down
driving me to drink
no one can help me
not a doctor
nor god himself
he can't erase the memories
or take away the pain
I know I feel because I'm alive
so if I die can I finally forget?
Written by
Gg78
(let it be)
Published 17th Feb 2013
| Edited 18th Feb 2013
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17th Feb 2013 6:48am
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17th Feb 2013 6:57am
No I know. But what fit best to me was waiting for death. Not waiting on death. It fits better with the question at the end I think :-) so thank you for the thought lol
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17th Feb 2013 6:50am
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Anonymous
17th Feb 2013 8:34am
This is full of emotion. Great job on this, you have written out poetically what a lot of people can't express. Beautiful, and even though I can identify, I know this is uniquely you.
Hope the feeling fades.
Cali<3
Hope the feeling fades.
Cali<3
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17th Feb 2013 3:01pm
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17th Feb 2013 12:29pm
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17th Feb 2013 3:01pm
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17th Feb 2013 2:51pm
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17th Feb 2013 3:02pm
Re: waiting for death
17th Feb 2013 5:07pm
it'slike
one'a
them
'maybe,maybe not'
kinda
things,y'know-
very well-wrought, dear
write[it]On
one'a
them
'maybe,maybe not'
kinda
things,y'know-
very well-wrought, dear
write[it]On
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17th Feb 2013 5:46pm
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17th Feb 2013 6:11pm
last line is timeless question of mortality.
well done miss. stay tuff woman.......
well done miss. stay tuff woman.......
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17th Feb 2013 6:18pm
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17th Feb 2013 7:27pm
Re: waiting for death
18th Feb 2013 00:00am
Gigi,
They skirt around the topic
play like *it* a fucking song
that's stuck
you got a pretty good thing going on here, I'd be breaking it up some though y'know.
anyhow , nice one Gigi, shine da fuck on
They skirt around the topic
play like *it* a fucking song
that's stuck
you got a pretty good thing going on here, I'd be breaking it up some though y'know.
anyhow , nice one Gigi, shine da fuck on
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re: Re: waiting for death
I'm trying to get better at this writing thing. Been reading a lot lot. But I'm still bad at formation. My thoughts and words are my thoughts and words but making sense of them is getting a bit easier. Anyways Ty Lep xoxo
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18th Feb 2013 00:06am
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