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Silly Love
Last night i danced on the moon
and ate cheese from your finger tips
we laughed at nothing
yet your eyes held something
Last night
we talked of loss
and we felt as if we gained
there were no
lies no heartbreak
last night there was freedom
in the silence that surrounded us
and excitement from each others shy touches
no fear existed were we were
no one could reach us
last night was the night i dreamed of our
silly love...
and ate cheese from your finger tips
we laughed at nothing
yet your eyes held something
Last night
we talked of loss
and we felt as if we gained
there were no
lies no heartbreak
last night there was freedom
in the silence that surrounded us
and excitement from each others shy touches
no fear existed were we were
no one could reach us
last night was the night i dreamed of our
silly love...
Published 16th Feb 2013
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16th Feb 2013 4:17am
Certainly an interesting dream. Fantasy can be an amazing thing till you have to come to reality of course. Good write
Chaos_Collector
Chaos_Collector
16th Feb 2013 4:20am
18th Feb 2013 2:36pm
I like these lines:
"last night there was freedom
in the silence that surrounded us
and excitement from each others shy touches
no fear existed were we were"
(just a typho: others > other's and were we were > where we were)
Overall, I'm impressed with the sincerity of your thoughts...
"last night there was freedom
in the silence that surrounded us
and excitement from each others shy touches
no fear existed were we were"
(just a typho: others > other's and were we were > where we were)
Overall, I'm impressed with the sincerity of your thoughts...
18th Feb 2013 4:19pm