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BLANKETED SILK IM IN
distant road that calls me home
horses run Rome, thatched back lash and eye
drips that bubble crack mosaic form
we the free, pocketed couple in fright
snug about threaded inside tight
were they blue, indeed, white and clayed
sharp as ever these little razorblades
You hue "I drink it" in fixated desire
You scream out for me to touch
of this hesitance, reluctance
abrasions and cuts, this thorn
as delightful is to bleed
You watch it run down
yet happy to see, proof it hurt
petted rail
remember well
every time
melted
silver blue gray
spread out forefathers sweat
we are sheathed and slick
like the surfer in the sky
between fingers, rubs and sigh
curl and fall
shooting past stars
riding the galaxy
horses run Rome, thatched back lash and eye
drips that bubble crack mosaic form
we the free, pocketed couple in fright
snug about threaded inside tight
were they blue, indeed, white and clayed
sharp as ever these little razorblades
You hue "I drink it" in fixated desire
You scream out for me to touch
of this hesitance, reluctance
abrasions and cuts, this thorn
as delightful is to bleed
You watch it run down
yet happy to see, proof it hurt
petted rail
remember well
every time
melted
silver blue gray
spread out forefathers sweat
we are sheathed and slick
like the surfer in the sky
between fingers, rubs and sigh
curl and fall
shooting past stars
riding the galaxy
Published 16th Feb 2013
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16th Feb 2013 2:30am
Whenever the word "Rome" is mentioned, my first impulse is to ponder if the reference is to the modern city, the glorious center of an empire, or the territory in decay in which legend says "Nero fiddled while Rome burned".
The connection to the cosmos is a nice touch and so proper for the place you are writing about.
The connection to the cosmos is a nice touch and so proper for the place you are writing about.
16th Feb 2013 2:39am
Thanx for the pop in jazz!!!
"Whilke fiddling while Rome burns at home"-DK
no wasn't Rome but a farm...it felt as Rome when I was a lad...and TRULY was in a state of decay...once Grand (there were a few I visited, and all the same in that aspect)
I don't think my head will ever quit living in the stars lol
"Whilke fiddling while Rome burns at home"-DK
no wasn't Rome but a farm...it felt as Rome when I was a lad...and TRULY was in a state of decay...once Grand (there were a few I visited, and all the same in that aspect)
I don't think my head will ever quit living in the stars lol
16th Feb 2013 2:58am
Laugh when you are getting over the flu, even on a Friday night the best thing at least for me is rest...
I have heard some historians state that Nero wasn't nearly as evil and selfish as once believed. I guess he doesn't get a pass like Caligula who was suppose to be mentally a wreck.
Just remember what EWF told us, "Keep Your Head To The Sky". (have a few funny stories about looking up)
I have heard some historians state that Nero wasn't nearly as evil and selfish as once believed. I guess he doesn't get a pass like Caligula who was suppose to be mentally a wreck.
Just remember what EWF told us, "Keep Your Head To The Sky". (have a few funny stories about looking up)
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16th Feb 2013 3:03am
LOL BROOMIE!!!
Thanx ferrr stopping by:)
No theres a few put around here and there like this...
(just a love for old white wash paint on farm houses(shhhh dems secrets)...I MEAN YES THIS IS A VERY DEEP POEM ABOUT
THE TRAGEDY AND TRIALS OF LIFE:)
Thanx ferrr stopping by:)
No theres a few put around here and there like this...
(just a love for old white wash paint on farm houses(shhhh dems secrets)...I MEAN YES THIS IS A VERY DEEP POEM ABOUT
THE TRAGEDY AND TRIALS OF LIFE:)
16th Feb 2013 6:12am
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16th Feb 2013 6:25am
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16th Feb 2013 10:27am
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1st Apr 2013 5:23am
"You hue "I drink it" in fixated desire
You scream out for me to touch
of this hesitance, reluctance
abrasions and cuts, this thorn
as delightful is to bleed"<--- YOU AWE ME! :)
The entire piece is Astonishing! xo
You scream out for me to touch
of this hesitance, reluctance
abrasions and cuts, this thorn
as delightful is to bleed"<--- YOU AWE ME! :)
The entire piece is Astonishing! xo
2nd Apr 2013 00:13am
"Awe Shux" I say pivoting my toe in the stones and blushing, "why Thank You Dear Rain"
cuts upon the land bleed the travels along the way eh?
cuts upon the land bleed the travels along the way eh?