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Rape Senryu
On a joyous ride
he whispers
- have a ride on me -
~ ~
Her tight fists
against his genitals
- an almost rape -
~ ~
Her silent thoughts
scream No
- an almost rape -
~ ~
Sneak peeks on
his woman beside her,
already asleep,
~ ~
His hideous odour
all over her
- he's finally finished -
he whispers
- have a ride on me -
~ ~
Her tight fists
against his genitals
- an almost rape -
~ ~
Her silent thoughts
scream No
- an almost rape -
~ ~
Sneak peeks on
his woman beside her,
already asleep,
~ ~
His hideous odour
all over her
- he's finally finished -
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Fucking Brilliance!!!
28th Aug 2010 12:27pm
re: Fucking Brilliance!!!
28th Aug 2010 12:43pm
im flattered thank you anando =]
also many thanks for adding it to your reading list.
basically it happened to me last night and the guy im refering to is my uncle. he didn't really rape me but he could if we were alone. i was completely disgusted
Lovely...
28th Aug 2010 12:44pm
and dark. I am always fascinated by the subject of rape, and you captured the essence of it beautifully. I am not very good at haiku but you have definitely showed me to keep trying, I will eventually do something as great as this. :) Good job!
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re: Lovely...
28th Aug 2010 12:54pm
thank you for your kind words. please do try the Haiku but be careful they may be quite addictive!
once you write one there's no stopping
I am proud of you Opheliac...
28th Aug 2010 1:18pm
First of all I have started admiring you as one of the best poets in the site, but then, that particularly after sharing this much of delicate piece of information before the world with so much of boldness, and now that you are also revealing the same with your attitude, I must give you a standing obession. I wish that this composition of yours reach every part of the world and strengthen womanhood. Hats off to you my dear.
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re: I am proud of you Opheliac...
28th Aug 2010 1:45pm
im speechless i want to thank you for your kind words though i think you're exegetaring a bit. i can say for sure that you're one of my favourite poets on this site. i didn't know that my words had such an affect on you but im so glad they do.
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28th Aug 2010 11:25pm
it really is hard. no i don't have any scars fortunately but the memory still remains..
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rich
28th Aug 2010 9:28pm
Your writing is superb, dark subject matter given your earlier comment, but so utterly briliant in the execution.
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powerful
31st Mar 2012 1:31am
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