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Ungraceful Grace
U-until the day that I die
N-never will I forget that lie…
G-given and sworn by my beloved
R-right at the time when I thought
A-angels existed, and one was him…
C-cheating was the game he played
E- engaged to one, married to another
F-feeling exultant in his success
U-until I found out his unlovely sport
L-left him with pains between his legs
G-gentle now do I ease in
R-relationships near far or away
A-act though I, so cautious
C-chances are I will love again
E-Enough to fall deep and hurt again.
N-never will I forget that lie…
G-given and sworn by my beloved
R-right at the time when I thought
A-angels existed, and one was him…
C-cheating was the game he played
E- engaged to one, married to another
F-feeling exultant in his success
U-until I found out his unlovely sport
L-left him with pains between his legs
G-gentle now do I ease in
R-relationships near far or away
A-act though I, so cautious
C-chances are I will love again
E-Enough to fall deep and hurt again.
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15th Feb 2013 1:48pm
Re: Ungraceful Grace
15th Feb 2013 3:45pm
Yes Grace --- you are strong --If there is no risk of hurt, then it is just a hollow connection.
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re: Re: Ungraceful Grace
15th Feb 2013 7:54pm
Thank you for reading and commenting D. But until to the end of the short journey on earth...one can't be strong all the time can one...?
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15th Feb 2013 7:55pm
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re: Re: Ungraceful Grace
15th Feb 2013 7:57pm
Re: Ungraceful Grace
15th Feb 2013 9:33pm
Good luck with the comp:)
excellent as always and that touch of sad...
excellent as always and that touch of sad...
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16th Feb 2013 00:22am
Re: Ungraceful Grace
15th Feb 2013 10:45pm
We try to tread lightly when Love is at risk, but the heart is a notions risk taker. I enjoyed this one, Grace. Good luck with the comp
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re: Re: Ungraceful Grace
16th Feb 2013 00:23am
Re: Ungraceful Grace
16th Feb 2013 8:04am
instead of using
*U-until the day that I die*
why not simply use
*Until the day that I die*
making it obvious only lessens the kick. and its not as if you have any use for the letter U or any of the other alphabets, they don't add anything significantly to each line.
other than that i like it :)
*U-until the day that I die*
why not simply use
*Until the day that I die*
making it obvious only lessens the kick. and its not as if you have any use for the letter U or any of the other alphabets, they don't add anything significantly to each line.
other than that i like it :)
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16th Feb 2013 4:02pm