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I Give You Me, My King: (Writen By; My Reesie Pieces)
I Give You Me, My King:
My Life
My Heart
My King….
You are my Everything,
My Songwriter
My Poet
My Solider in times of war…
I give to you my life…
My life possessing my spirit
My spirit possessing my soul
I give to you my love because you have made me whole
Whole to trust
Whole to be a peace
Whole to find the true meaning of life
To live to love
To love to be loved
I submit myself to you
To love you
To honor you
To lift you up when times get tough
Today, tomorrow, and forevermore….. I give you ME, my King……
My Life
My Heart
My King….
You are my Everything,
My Songwriter
My Poet
My Solider in times of war…
I give to you my life…
My life possessing my spirit
My spirit possessing my soul
I give to you my love because you have made me whole
Whole to trust
Whole to be a peace
Whole to find the true meaning of life
To live to love
To love to be loved
I submit myself to you
To love you
To honor you
To lift you up when times get tough
Today, tomorrow, and forevermore….. I give you ME, my King……
Published 12th Feb 2013
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13th Feb 2013 00:12am
Not bad, but can always use improvement. You're doing well with being descriptive, now you need some metaphors, piece together a story as it's flying above my head, as a friend would say. Remember your punctuation needs to be used properly or your work will discourage readers to continue, but nicely phrased.
Keep it up. :-)
Keep it up. :-)
