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Needing a little Respect
Respect is earned they said
Can it be true
For whatever I do
I never get any respect around here
I baked a pretty cake for him
My pretty blue eyed boy
Hoping he'd respect my efforts
He looked at it and stifled a laugh
I tried too hard to earn respect
I swot at school and got all As
Coming home to show by parents
My happy dog ate it instead
How do I get some respect
from around here
I tried to wash laundry
Brush all shoes and sundry
But nobody cares what I do
Or have achieved
What do I do
To get some respect here...
Can it be true
For whatever I do
I never get any respect around here
I baked a pretty cake for him
My pretty blue eyed boy
Hoping he'd respect my efforts
He looked at it and stifled a laugh
I tried too hard to earn respect
I swot at school and got all As
Coming home to show by parents
My happy dog ate it instead
How do I get some respect
from around here
I tried to wash laundry
Brush all shoes and sundry
But nobody cares what I do
Or have achieved
What do I do
To get some respect here...
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11th Feb 2013 1:39pm
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11th Feb 2013 2:34pm
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re: Re: Needing a little Respect
11th Feb 2013 2:36pm
Thanks Strider, for reading and commenting. I entered this in Kitty's comp. She has great ideas.
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11th Feb 2013 2:54pm
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11th Feb 2013 3:09pm
Re: Needing a little Respect
Anonymous
11th Feb 2013 4:38pm
Interesting short poem. As I read this, I am reminded that I need not go any further than the mirror to find all the respect I need. The 70's supergroup, The Staples Singers wrote these words so long ago:
"....Respect yourself,
Respect yourself
If you don't respect yourself
Ain't nobody gonna give a good cahoot,
na na na na
Respect yourself..." : )
"....Respect yourself,
Respect yourself
If you don't respect yourself
Ain't nobody gonna give a good cahoot,
na na na na
Respect yourself..." : )
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re: Re: Needing a little Respect
11th Feb 2013 11:19pm
MM, from the mouth of poets...from mine actually comes insipidity. Just did the poem for kitty's comp. Not ever good.:-)
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Re: Needing a little Respect
11th Feb 2013 5:56pm
re: Re: Needing a little Respect
11th Feb 2013 11:20pm
Dear soul, kinder thoughts have I not gotten, but thanks for reading and commenting.
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Re: Needing a little Respect
11th Feb 2013 9:52pm
Wonderful Grace ---
but really...who gets more respect than YOU ?
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but really...who gets more respect than YOU ?
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11th Feb 2013 11:21pm
Re: Needing a little Respect
12th Feb 2013 10:38pm
I agree, you are highly respected poet here, and else where.
We all need just a little respect, even when we are not the best. Nicely prosed....Ms. Grace.
We all need just a little respect, even when we are not the best. Nicely prosed....Ms. Grace.
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13th Feb 2013 4:12am