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Delivery
An apricot sunrise shares radiance
to every omniscient particle,
inky fingerprints littered
over her realm of being.
Aquatic eyes glint nostalgia
as a pen is seized,
bruising ambiance with
blunt vehemence.
She's diffusing paragraphs over
sacred distances from heaven to earth,
bleeding ill-fated resolutions.
Whimsical calculations are
jotted upon nebulous memo’s,
drawing pins pierced into
the cracks of her skull.
Languidly she forms another slice of
parchment from the cloud beside her,
slanting carelessly over the edge.
Gathering the letters in one hand,
her courage in the other;
flurries of feathers plummet
towards the mortals.
She’ll deliver these herself.
to every omniscient particle,
inky fingerprints littered
over her realm of being.
Aquatic eyes glint nostalgia
as a pen is seized,
bruising ambiance with
blunt vehemence.
She's diffusing paragraphs over
sacred distances from heaven to earth,
bleeding ill-fated resolutions.
Whimsical calculations are
jotted upon nebulous memo’s,
drawing pins pierced into
the cracks of her skull.
Languidly she forms another slice of
parchment from the cloud beside her,
slanting carelessly over the edge.
Gathering the letters in one hand,
her courage in the other;
flurries of feathers plummet
towards the mortals.
She’ll deliver these herself.
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Re: Delivery
8th Feb 2013 5:25pm
Wow, you have such a way with your words, such detailed imagery that I could only hope to write with one day...
well written...but you know that ;)
awesome poem!
well written...but you know that ;)
awesome poem!
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8th Feb 2013 5:29pm
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8th Feb 2013 7:17pm
Anonymous
- Edited 17th May 2018 11:37am
8th Feb 2013 7:20pm
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I'm usually a little mindlost when i'm penning,
it all fits the general jigsaw of things in the moment;
but then I forget a piece and confusion ensues.
Aquatic eyes glint nostalgia
as a pen is seized,
bruising ambiance with
blunt vehemence.
I suppose I meant to imply the power
that we hold with our words,
especially when written with
intensity/spirit/emotion. I think.
Thank you for your comments!
it all fits the general jigsaw of things in the moment;
but then I forget a piece and confusion ensues.
Aquatic eyes glint nostalgia
as a pen is seized,
bruising ambiance with
blunt vehemence.
I suppose I meant to imply the power
that we hold with our words,
especially when written with
intensity/spirit/emotion. I think.
Thank you for your comments!
Re: Delivery
8th Feb 2013 8:47pm
scribbs you never disapoint. i look forward to your new work daily. please keep it up. it keeps me inspired............
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8th Feb 2013 8:51pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 9:39pm
8th Feb 2013 10:01pm
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8th Feb 2013 10:02pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 00:09am
8th Feb 2013 10:48pm
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9th Feb 2013 6:34pm
This is beautifully written. I love your imagery here. A lot of great lines and vocabulary as well. Very much enjoyed.
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9th Feb 2013 6:42pm
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Anonymous
16th Feb 2013 4:15am
AMAZING! Simply AMAZING!! xo
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16th Feb 2013 7:35am