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shutting down
sinking gently into the deep blue.
watching the silver light fade.
blowing out all excess air.
gracefully accepting your fate.
watching the silver light fade.
blowing out all excess air.
gracefully accepting your fate.
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6th Feb 2013 1:14am
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6th Feb 2013 1:21am
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Re: shutting down
6th Feb 2013 3:04pm
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6th Feb 2013 3:40pm
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8th Feb 2013 2:54pm
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8th Feb 2013 3:25pm
thank you Gigi,drowning terrible feeling!
i was going to change it but ive grown a massive beard and my sister says i look like a murderer.
thanks for the comment and the complement.
sean
i was going to change it but ive grown a massive beard and my sister says i look like a murderer.
thanks for the comment and the complement.
sean
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8th Feb 2013 6:09pm
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Anonymous
9th Feb 2013 7:43am
Simplicity is bliss!
Nice!:)
Nice!:)
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re: Re: shutting down
9th Feb 2013 8:29am
thank you rain1courtel sometimes i think its better to keep things simple.thank you for the comment
sean
sean