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Haiku II
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Haiku II
The nightingales sing
In happy expectation
Don't wish for too much
Written by
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
Published
5th Feb 2013
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Re: Haiku II
arran-darkstreet
5th Feb 2013 8:29pm
just read all your poems short but great impact on all of them...looking for something a little longer and a bit deeper in the future, so you better get your english sorted out lady because my german is awful haha..peace and love
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re: Re: Haiku II
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
5th Feb 2013 8:46pm
Thanks a lot, arran-darkstreet! I'm in some longer ones but all that comes out seems too intimate to share *sigh*. But I'm trying hard, I promise!
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- Edited 15th May 2018 00:09am
5th Feb 2013 11:22pm
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re: Re: Haiku II
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
6th Feb 2013 6:40am
Thank you very much, Carlene! You give me courage!
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- Edited 15th May 2018 00:16am
17th Jul 2013 10:26pm
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re: Re: Haiku II
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
17th Jul 2013 11:56pm
I'm glad you think the 17 syllables are enough to transmit the underlying message. Thanks a lot!
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