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Symphony For Sinners
Hundreds, millions of times in my head
same conclusion, this is going nowhere
except to Heartbreak Hotel
but this addiction does me in
Sweat inducing with two bodies in play
temporal relief that we try to extend
filling a vacancy that all sometime feel
and we are on the cheating part of town
And yes I tried to claim that spot
with the old lady on many occasions
but she doesn't tame my rod
with the ferocity that splits volcanoes
Know you must feel the same when you text
"I need you" comes flashing on the screen
hours away from loading you with fluids craved
the work is a blur, bracketed by sensual echoes
If the dominant instinct is ruling my world
oh why must it be so selective?
for as good as it feels
I must severe the chord
"This desperation
Dislocation
Separation
Condemnation
Revelation
In temptation
Isolation
Desolation
Let it go"
Lyrics courtesy of U2
same conclusion, this is going nowhere
except to Heartbreak Hotel
but this addiction does me in
Sweat inducing with two bodies in play
temporal relief that we try to extend
filling a vacancy that all sometime feel
and we are on the cheating part of town
And yes I tried to claim that spot
with the old lady on many occasions
but she doesn't tame my rod
with the ferocity that splits volcanoes
Know you must feel the same when you text
"I need you" comes flashing on the screen
hours away from loading you with fluids craved
the work is a blur, bracketed by sensual echoes
If the dominant instinct is ruling my world
oh why must it be so selective?
for as good as it feels
I must severe the chord
"This desperation
Dislocation
Separation
Condemnation
Revelation
In temptation
Isolation
Desolation
Let it go"
Lyrics courtesy of U2
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Re: Symphony For Sinners
30th Jan 2013 4:07am
This is a wonderfully... emotional piece
filled with sizzle and heat...
I love it!
Fire
filled with sizzle and heat...
I love it!
Fire
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30th Jan 2013 4:13am
Re: Symphony For Sinners
30th Jan 2013 4:17am
I love this piece bro. JAZZ!!!
Great read and write!!
PEN ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sir Lancelott
Great read and write!!
PEN ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: Symphony For Sinners
30th Jan 2013 4:24am
Thanks, I think it would be fun to get people together and talk about musical inspirations. This is partially motivated by Billy Paul's "Me and Mrs. Jones".
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Anonymous
30th Jan 2013 4:34am
Oh but to be a sinner in your symphony, Jazz!
*Love Me and Mrs.Jones! I can see the motivation that birth this write....xo
*Love Me and Mrs.Jones! I can see the motivation that birth this write....xo
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re: Re: Symphony For Sinners
30th Jan 2013 4:38am
I think we have a few writers here that could give a royal performance---and please any gender. (smile)
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30th Jan 2013 5:00am
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Re: Symphony For Sinners
30th Jan 2013 3:16pm
Wonderfully crafted...I wanna get lost in your musical symphony and feel the heat forever!
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30th Jan 2013 4:42pm
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5th Feb 2013 1:13am
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5th Feb 2013 6:21am
Thanks, that kind of praise is going to make me read what I wrote again! (laugh)
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5th Feb 2013 1:26am
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5th Feb 2013 6:22am
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5th Feb 2013 11:20pm
I was totally gloomy about it. Did u experience it as well?! I honestly thought it was just me.
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6th Feb 2013 1:03am
Luckily I have made friends on Facebook with writers here so they alerted me to what was going on.
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6th Feb 2013 5:18am
Oh great! Please add me as well. Keep me in the loop for any future mishaps. CeCe Lyric.
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Re: Symphony For Sinners
5th Feb 2013 5:30pm
LOVE those lines!
but she doesn't tame my rod
with the ferocity that splits volcanoes
And the rest, too. You're poems are enchanting as well as inspiring...
but she doesn't tame my rod
with the ferocity that splits volcanoes
And the rest, too. You're poems are enchanting as well as inspiring...
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re: Re: Symphony For Sinners
6th Feb 2013 1:05am
If I can even be 1/10 as enchanting as Joseph Campbell, I will be happy.
Thanks for the kind comments.
Thanks for the kind comments.