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Every time
I look up the sky every time
When I feel the tears in my eyes
For I know we are under the same blue sky
We breath of the same air
Even though we are continents apart
The golden circle that binds us
Has not lost it's strength
I send my love through the passing breeze
Whisper my longing through the air
Weep my loneliness away at twilight
Clasping the pillows you had rested on
I lay my aches on this mat
Close my eyes and feel your arms
In my waking dreams
I look up the sky every time
I think of you my beloved
The sun shining into my face
The warmth soothing me
Pretending it's your kisses
Sent with love in the passing breeze.
When I feel the tears in my eyes
For I know we are under the same blue sky
We breath of the same air
Even though we are continents apart
The golden circle that binds us
Has not lost it's strength
I send my love through the passing breeze
Whisper my longing through the air
Weep my loneliness away at twilight
Clasping the pillows you had rested on
I lay my aches on this mat
Close my eyes and feel your arms
In my waking dreams
I look up the sky every time
I think of you my beloved
The sun shining into my face
The warmth soothing me
Pretending it's your kisses
Sent with love in the passing breeze.
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Re: Every time
27th Jan 2013 2:11pm
This is such Beautiful Art Sweet Grace
Your depth of expression is felt around the world!!!
Your depth of expression is felt around the world!!!
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27th Jan 2013 3:49pm
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27th Jan 2013 3:48pm
Than you so much for dropping by, reading and leaving an encouraging comments.
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27th Jan 2013 3:07pm
Grace this a exquisite expression of love and longing. Lovely work! :-)
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27th Jan 2013 3:46pm
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27th Jan 2013 9:18pm
another beautiful poem of missing love
Keep your eyes up, and feel the wind, my friend.
Hugs
Keep your eyes up, and feel the wind, my friend.
Hugs
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28th Jan 2013 00:30am
As always Glynis dear, there is always hope to even though it's just like a rubber band that bind, to keep the heart from shattering. Hugs.
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27th Jan 2013 10:12pm
Grace, you always touch my heart so deeply, so lovingly, with your poetry! The lines that really sang so magically to me the most were these:
"I look up the sky every time
When I feel the tears in my eyes
For I know we are under the same blue sky"
That sky can feel so big and vast sometimes, and it is hard when the tears are falling, I know. But never let the vastness overwhelm you, nor the tears vanquish your beautiful spirit! Your poetry shines brightly, because of that spirit. A single glorious point of light in all that vastness! Never feel otherwise, dear soul.
"I look up the sky every time
When I feel the tears in my eyes
For I know we are under the same blue sky"
That sky can feel so big and vast sometimes, and it is hard when the tears are falling, I know. But never let the vastness overwhelm you, nor the tears vanquish your beautiful spirit! Your poetry shines brightly, because of that spirit. A single glorious point of light in all that vastness! Never feel otherwise, dear soul.
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28th Jan 2013 00:40am
Thank you Jessica dear, you are always so generous with your kind words. I am humbled that you read my expressions in the poem and respond with such compassion.
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28th Jan 2013 00:43am
Hi Lauren, thank you for being here, reading the poem and commenting. You are so kind and in my mind I am giving you a big hug too.
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10th Feb 2013 00:06am
Hi Magdalena, so nice of you to drop by and read and comment on this poem. Humbled and honoured , my dear.
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