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Numb day
I'd rather paint myself a pretty picture
then sit in my own hell
miserable
slowly digging my own grave
fighting the thoughts of a thousand words
it's over
but it
still
hurts
the
same
I try to stay steady numb to everything
but somedays
I'm able to feel
and on those days
I feel like I died ten thousand deaths
but yet more alive then anyone else
then sit in my own hell
miserable
slowly digging my own grave
fighting the thoughts of a thousand words
it's over
but it
still
hurts
the
same
I try to stay steady numb to everything
but somedays
I'm able to feel
and on those days
I feel like I died ten thousand deaths
but yet more alive then anyone else
Written by
Gg78
(let it be)
Published 27th Jan 2013
| Edited 4th Feb 2013
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Re: Numb day
27th Jan 2013 7:05am
Re: Numb day
Anonymous
27th Jan 2013 7:09am
....perfecting the art of a fake smile. It’s not so difficult when you are completely numb.
I love emotional Ink! This was written beautifully, Gigi! :)
I love emotional Ink! This was written beautifully, Gigi! :)
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re: Re: Numb day
27th Jan 2013 7:13am
Re: Numb day
Anonymous
27th Jan 2013 7:10am
This poem is very haunting and thought provoking, I also like the format, creative, but not over the top and annoying like some people do.
I really liked:
"it's over
but it
Still
Hurts
The
Same"
the stepping down effect really added to this, making me feel as if your heart was sinking in spite of yourself, that even though something is done and over with it's still dragging you down.
Love it.
Caliban
I really liked:
"it's over
but it
Still
Hurts
The
Same"
the stepping down effect really added to this, making me feel as if your heart was sinking in spite of yourself, that even though something is done and over with it's still dragging you down.
Love it.
Caliban
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re: Re: Numb day
27th Jan 2013 7:15am
I'm glad you liked it sweetie. And I'm so so happy that you caught on to the ladder effect. I wasn't sure if anyone would get it.. Thank you xoxo
Re: Numb day
27th Jan 2013 9:14am
'I feel like I died ten thousand deaths
but yet more alive then anyone else'
I can sympathize.
This poem seeps emotion,
I do like the ladder of words
it fit nicely.
Well written,
Scribbler.
but yet more alive then anyone else'
I can sympathize.
This poem seeps emotion,
I do like the ladder of words
it fit nicely.
Well written,
Scribbler.
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Re: Numb day
27th Jan 2013 9:16am
Beautiful gigi. and i didnt know it was you for battle. baby i cant do that. im sorry. i love you too much. not even for fun .
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re: Re: Numb day
27th Jan 2013 2:19pm
That's why I didn't start it. Couldn't boo. Not my thing to just bash people xoxox Ty sweetie
re: re: Re: Numb day
27th Jan 2013 2:20pm
That's why I didn't start it. Couldn't boo. Not my thing to just bash people xoxox Ty sweetie
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27th Jan 2013 2:29pm
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Re: Numb day
27th Jan 2013 9:48pm
love this a little bit too much, fantastic work, i absolutely love this :)
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27th Jan 2013 11:35pm
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Re: Numb day
29th Jan 2013 6:19am
Can't feel anything. This must hurt even when you are numb and can't feel. You do great work, and it is good.
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4th Feb 2013 11:17am
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re: Re: Numb day
4th Feb 2013 1:39pm
I will take your advice since I admire your writing so much and trust your opinion and change it.. Ty xoxox