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About her.
Do you think about her?
As much as you think about me?
Because I was under the impression,
As if you were to keep guessing.
That it was solely my neck that you caressed.
But I was only in a position to be undressed.
A sorrowed lust, rushed to your fingertips.
That seem to move faster than your quivering lips.
Only to succumb to the suggestion of your hips,
As you tell another girl "you've missed this"
As much as you think about me?
Because I was under the impression,
As if you were to keep guessing.
That it was solely my neck that you caressed.
But I was only in a position to be undressed.
A sorrowed lust, rushed to your fingertips.
That seem to move faster than your quivering lips.
Only to succumb to the suggestion of your hips,
As you tell another girl "you've missed this"
Published 26th Jan 2013
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26th Jan 2013 12:54pm
wow i love this! amazing write my favourite part was
"That it was solely my neck that you caressed.
But I was only in a position to be undressed."
"That it was solely my neck that you caressed.
But I was only in a position to be undressed."
26th Jan 2013 12:59pm
Thank you, thank you so much! Those two lines are the major parts too this poem :)
That was AMAZING!!!
I loved this piece
Great read sweets
PEN ON !!!!!!!
Sir Lancelott
check me out sometime
I loved this piece
Great read sweets
PEN ON !!!!!!!
Sir Lancelott
check me out sometime
wow i really like this poem, but also feel bad because i have been that guys before and has hurt someone!
28th Jan 2013 7:13am