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Finding You Again
From a long forgotten past you rose
to find me where I stood,
my heart ,unsure, froze…
Never would I have thought
to see you again,
never would I have thought
to feel the way I did back then.
Why are the heavens castigating me this way?
Ripping open an old scar long since sealed,
until the tears once again flow
and once more the pain holds sway.
The sound of your voice, its timbre,
is enough to lay claim to my soul.
The proximity of your body
reeks havoc on every fiber of my being,
it loosed my grasp on reality’s hold
making me again feel nineteen years old.
I loved you more than life
and dared to dream of things kept behind
a glass the color rose light.
Reality cruel and unforgiving
soon let it be known,
that we belonged to others
and that we should not roam…
But love cannot be tamed, contain or denied
and it will have its way no matter what
society dictates at the time.
We dared to steal moments in time
to love passionately as we once did
when I was your and you were mine …
Oh…What sweet bliss it was to know
the feel of your body
and the power of your kiss that was so bold.
The riot that was created
when in your arms, my form you did enfold.
It is the stuff of legends, the fodder
that poets write about in prose.
The agony that is to love knowing
that come the morrow,
we each must return to our unhappy homes.
This was destiny’s Idea of a cruel, cruel joke…
Gypsy Red
to find me where I stood,
my heart ,unsure, froze…
Never would I have thought
to see you again,
never would I have thought
to feel the way I did back then.
Why are the heavens castigating me this way?
Ripping open an old scar long since sealed,
until the tears once again flow
and once more the pain holds sway.
The sound of your voice, its timbre,
is enough to lay claim to my soul.
The proximity of your body
reeks havoc on every fiber of my being,
it loosed my grasp on reality’s hold
making me again feel nineteen years old.
I loved you more than life
and dared to dream of things kept behind
a glass the color rose light.
Reality cruel and unforgiving
soon let it be known,
that we belonged to others
and that we should not roam…
But love cannot be tamed, contain or denied
and it will have its way no matter what
society dictates at the time.
We dared to steal moments in time
to love passionately as we once did
when I was your and you were mine …
Oh…What sweet bliss it was to know
the feel of your body
and the power of your kiss that was so bold.
The riot that was created
when in your arms, my form you did enfold.
It is the stuff of legends, the fodder
that poets write about in prose.
The agony that is to love knowing
that come the morrow,
we each must return to our unhappy homes.
This was destiny’s Idea of a cruel, cruel joke…
Gypsy Red
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
24th Jan 2013 10:25pm
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re: Re: Finding You Again
24th Jan 2013 11:53pm
Hello there my dearest Magda, This piece is very, very real and it just happened recently, the end is yet to be written. Thank you so much, as always your support and positive feed back is most appreciated.I've missed you all too!
Red
Red
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
24th Jan 2013 10:26pm
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re: Re: Finding You Again
24th Jan 2013 11:54pm
Gabriel bello! Thank you, your enthusiastic comments always make me smile.
Red
Red
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
24th Jan 2013 11:01pm
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re: Re: Finding You Again
24th Jan 2013 11:55pm
Strider hermano hope you are well, thank you so much for the great comment, yes many emotions and many uncertainties but hope is the last thing that dies.
Huggs Red
Huggs Red
Re: Finding You Again
24th Jan 2013 11:30pm
Hey.......
So Good to see you back her Lady Red!
This is a Beautiful poem
with raw emotion and angst...
truely... the stuff of legend.
Fire
So Good to see you back her Lady Red!
This is a Beautiful poem
with raw emotion and angst...
truely... the stuff of legend.
Fire
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re: Re: Finding You Again
24th Jan 2013 11:57pm
Yes maam glad to be back and so happy to see you guys have not forgotten lil ol me lol Thank you very much.
Red
Red
Re: Finding You Again
24th Jan 2013 11:36pm
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24th Jan 2013 11:57pm
Re: Finding You Again
25th Jan 2013 00:31am
"Finding You Again" - a very fitting title for your comeback. I missed your writings...
Wonderfully written as usual with your trademark visual poetry.
Wonderfully written as usual with your trademark visual poetry.
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25th Jan 2013 1:41pm
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25th Jan 2013 4:14pm
You're always welcome Red...I was just thinking of you the other day because I want to start a competition, and I know you're the only one right now who can jump-start what I have in mind.
So, please check the comp thread within a few days.
So, please check the comp thread within a few days.
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25th Jan 2013 8:52pm
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Anonymous
25th Jan 2013 9:52am
Wait ... who is this guy ... let me at em!!! Nice poeting. So glad you're back I missed you.
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25th Jan 2013 1:43pm
Re: Finding You Again
26th Jan 2013 4:52pm
Dear Gypsy red, so much pain in those words. You are strumming my pain with your poem too...as always, you are so expressive...
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re: Re: Finding You Again
26th Jan 2013 7:40pm
Dearest Grace always so perceptive and sensitive the end of this story is yet to be written. Thanks for reading.
Red
Red
Re: Finding You Again
10th Feb 2013 3:14pm
You've been missed. Few online choose to be themselves instead of who they aim to be. Here's to your hope being realized!
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re: Re: Finding You Again
10th Feb 2013 3:57pm
Cheers my darling friend thank you for the support you have always given me!
Red
Red
Re: Finding You Again
1st Mar 2013 8:26pm
re: Re: Finding You Again
3rd Mar 2013 7:04pm
That is profound scrutiny of my piece and much appreciated, thank you for stopping by to read my work, this one was very personal.
Red
Red
re: re: Re: Finding You Again
4th Mar 2013 2:37am
It's about a former lover. I have my own to compare with...
Again. Great work!
Sinatra877 Out.
Again. Great work!
Sinatra877 Out.
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4th Mar 2013 1:45pm