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self-medicate
what of it?
no one to know
or care
chalkdust tablets
sharp spirits
cough smoke
no, doc, try
again... how about
nothing?
the space between
words, the break
in breaths
sweet silence, an
empty mind
and sleep
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Re: self-medicate
21st Jan 2013 8:51pm
"the space between words,the break in breaths"
i identify with this all too well atakti...
well done....
i identify with this all too well atakti...
well done....
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re: Re: self-medicate
21st Jan 2013 9:04pm
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21st Jan 2013 9:05pm
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Re: self-medicate
21st Jan 2013 8:59pm
Well written;
the space between
words, the break
in breaths
perfectly relatable,
effective.
the space between
words, the break
in breaths
perfectly relatable,
effective.
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21st Jan 2013 9:06pm
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21st Jan 2013 9:07pm
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re: Re: self-medicate
22nd Jan 2013 5:48am
I'm pleased you like it, Indie. I seem to get best responses to the ones that come easiest to me... an "idle doodle" I thought this one.
I guess I let my guard down, and some inspiration snuck in, lol.
I guess I let my guard down, and some inspiration snuck in, lol.
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22nd Jan 2013 5:48am
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23rd Jan 2013 2:53pm
Agreed. This does sound more tip-toey than your other pieces, but that's what I like about it. It's simple, pure and hits home.
I love how unexpected things that come out of nowhere seem to work out.
I love how unexpected things that come out of nowhere seem to work out.
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23rd Jan 2013 3:31pm
Re: self-medicate
21st Jan 2013 10:36pm
"sweet silence, an
empty mind
and sleep"
hard fought for, hard won indeed
Get this one big time Hun :)
empty mind
and sleep"
hard fought for, hard won indeed
Get this one big time Hun :)
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re: Re: self-medicate
22nd Jan 2013 5:49am
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re: Re: self-medicate
22nd Jan 2013 5:50am
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21st Jan 2013 11:37pm
re: Re: self-medicate
22nd Jan 2013 5:51am
I wish you peaceful slumber, Gigi.
There's time for more plotting in the morning, eh?
;)
There's time for more plotting in the morning, eh?
;)
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re: Re: self-medicate
22nd Jan 2013 5:51am
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Anonymous
22nd Jan 2013 9:29am
Beautiful in simplicity and sparcity ... like poetic suishi ...
Really like:
"the space between
words, the break
in breaths"
Really like:
"the space between
words, the break
in breaths"
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22nd Jan 2013 5:01pm
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23rd Jan 2013 2:59am
Re: self-medicate
28th Jan 2013 6:33pm
For lack of words to comment with I shall simply just like this. Outstanding write!
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29th Jan 2013 7:44pm