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Yakkety Yak
Tired of throwing
pennies at you're head
this time
I have a hammer
for you're thoughts
communication
is key
mother fucker
my crystal ball
is cloudy
like everyone
around me
I haven't been
able to read minds
since that
telepathic accident
of 1996
speak now
or forever hold
you're peace
I have a hammer
for you're thoughts
this silence breeds
disease.
pennies at you're head
this time
I have a hammer
for you're thoughts
communication
is key
mother fucker
my crystal ball
is cloudy
like everyone
around me
I haven't been
able to read minds
since that
telepathic accident
of 1996
speak now
or forever hold
you're peace
I have a hammer
for you're thoughts
this silence breeds
disease.
Published 20th Jan 2013
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20th Jan 2013 5:49pm
'this silence breeds
disease; I have a hammer
for you're thoughts'
Lots of people i'd like to say this to,
if I dared enough.
Awesome poem.
disease; I have a hammer
for you're thoughts'
Lots of people i'd like to say this to,
if I dared enough.
Awesome poem.
20th Jan 2013 5:51pm
:) yeah...I cant stand people who don't communicate
they suck..the life right out of you :)
thanks
they suck..the life right out of you :)
thanks
20th Jan 2013 6:05pm
A pretty forthright way you have Nikki I think, looking at that hammer, I'd tell you evetthing ;-)
Well penned my friend!
Well penned my friend!
20th Jan 2013 8:08pm
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20th Jan 2013 8:11pm
20th Jan 2013 8:31pm
ah yes, nice display of humor here Nikkimoe
Beyond the humor though, this is pretty fkn deep and well thought out.
liked it a lot.
ps. intrigued about the telepathic incident.
Beyond the humor though, this is pretty fkn deep and well thought out.
liked it a lot.
ps. intrigued about the telepathic incident.
20th Jan 2013 10:37pm
Lol....thanks I can't really talk about it I signed a cosmic contract with the universe and well there was a confidentiality clause in it :)
20th Jan 2013 9:10pm
20th Jan 2013 10:39pm
21st Jan 2013 00:56am
Lol! Excellent read here Nikkiemoe (well, unless you on the wrong end of the hammer leastwise). Much enjoyed.
Uley
Uley
21st Jan 2013 1:14am
21st Jan 2013 1:37am
awesome piece! I freaking hate when people ignore you or give you one word answers. Wtf right? haha anyways loved it!
21st Jan 2013 1:43am
:) right ! Speak your mind don't expect people to be mind readers! Thanks for reading :)
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